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Copyright: Andrew Anoufrienko (kozerog) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 163 W: 6 N: 14] (980)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-12
Categories: Nature
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-12-28 0:59
Viewed: 772
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Yashika T5, Film Fuji ISO 400
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Hello Andrew

Havent seen alot of Finland on TE..this is good refreshing one..Youve managed the light well in this place..seems the right exposure. The elements have been carefully used with the right perspective ..overall good depth and layers.. a good job :) Like it.

Cheers
Sayeed

All is good except composition (at least for me...). I feel you are trying to show the foreground rocks, as well as the grass and a bit of sky. In the end, you are showing bits of this and that. I mean you are not showing enough of what was around. Maybe use a wider lens, maybe step back a little, or just concentrate on one thing. Landscape format? Only one of the many points of view...

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  • Viera Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 158 W: 16 N: 25] (840)
  • [2008-02-04 7:20]

Hi Andrew,

I like the whole composition of this shot.... the black and red stones in water in contrast with grass.. Good shot

regards
viera

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