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• isabela_sor (32388)
• [2007-12-15 14:25]

I have read about this fort so many years ago in a book of Arthur Conan Doyle and still I remember the whole action of that book:)Means that I am not so old ..or yes,I am?:):):)
The woman was visiting that place because I can see her handbag and I like the timing here,catching her exactly in the frame of door
Ciao,Paolo

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• PeterDF (247)
• [2007-12-15 14:26]

Wonderful shot here of this mother and her little one. They're beautifully framed with great colors and clothing. Very nicely done.

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• edouarddd (200)
• [2007-12-15 14:58]

Nice, but the top of the picture is benting. It could have been better if you were in front of the door to avoid this bad perpspective effect.

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• SteveH (1935)
• [2007-12-15 18:09]
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Hi Paolo, I too was distracted by the perspective distortion so I did a workshop, really as an experiment as I hadn't used the perspective distortion tool before. I also thought the orange sari was a little too bright so reduced the red saturation and sharpened as her face is a little soft. See what you think. Cheers, Steve

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• grantlp (1580)
• [2007-12-15 19:48]

Hi Paolo,
This is an attractive image of this woman and child, which has good contrast between her colourful clothes and the brown doorway. The portrait format works well as it helps focus attention purely onto the people anf their border. Well captured.
Cheers Grant

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• macondo (9075)
• [2007-12-16 3:45]

Hello Paolo.
I like this one very much. I think the colours are fine and the composition is wonderful. Maybe you should correct the distortion at the top, that is all. The pose of the beautiful woman and her child is very pleasing . Very nice shot.
Regards,
Andrew