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Copyright: silan deniz (maredeniz) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 166 W: 21 N: 95] (1006)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-10-10
Categories: Decisive Moment
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-11-27 8:02
Viewed: 1121
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 80
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The most beautiful sea :
is the sea which is not reached yet.
The most beautiful child :
hasn't grown yet.
The most beautiful days of ours :
are those which we didn't live yet.
And the most beautiful words I want to tell you :
are the words which I did'nt tell yet...


en guzel deniz:
henuz gidilmemis olanidir.
en guzel cocuk:
henuz buyumedi.
en guzel gunlerimiz:
henuz yasamadiklarimiz.
ve sana soylemek istedigim en guzel soz:
henuz soylememis oldugum sozdur...


Η πιο όμορφη θάλασσα είναι αυτή
που δεν την αρμενίσαμε ακόμα
Το πιο όμορφο παιδί δεν μεγάλωσε ακόμα
Τις πιο όμορφες μέρες μας
δεν τις ζήσαμε ακόμα
Κι ό,τι πιο όμορφο
ό,τι πιο όμορφο θα 'θελα να σου πω
δεν στο 'πα ακόμα

Nazim Hikmet Ran

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Critiques [Translate]

  • Great 
  • avene Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1437 W: 80 N: 1837] (6906)
  • [2007-11-27 8:20]
  • [+]

another excellent shot, Silan, seems that you have found a very good point of view :) excellent composition, very strong sense of movement that is further emphasised by the distinctive lines. and again, the human silhouette makes this otherwise abstract shot very lively. beautoful colours and excellent sharpness, great shot.
best,
Kristine

Hi Silan, i love Hikmet...and the words you have choosen are beautiful..
like the image...
fantastic place, nature and a perfect position of the woman..
stunning colours too
congrats!
ciao!
valeria

Hi Silan,
An excellent photojob from a very good point of view.
I like the contrast between colours and how you framed it.
Thanks for sharing and regards
Aires

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  • erel Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 814 W: 0 N: 371] (10219)
  • [2007-11-27 9:31]
  • [+]

MERHABA
Renkler ve mizansen bayağı yakışmış, kadraj da çok iyi.tebrikler. EREL

merhabalar;
pastel tonların geçişi çok etkileyici..sanki ressam parmak uçlarıyla boyaları yavaşça birbirine yedirmiş yumuşak geçişler yapmış gibi..harika bir not ile süslenmiş yalın bir kare..
elinize sağlık
ayse

Selam ,ton ve compozisyon süper kadrajda ustalık gözüküyor.Şiir ise tam yerinde,tebrikler.Hadi

  • Great 
  • gbeli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 420 W: 66 N: 233] (1939)
  • [2007-11-27 10:08]
  • [2] [+]

Η πιο όμορφη θάλασσα

Η πιο όμορφη θάλασσα είναι αυτή
που δεν την αρμενίσαμε ακόμα
Το πιο όμορφο παιδί δεν μεγάλωσε ακόμα

Τις πιο όμορφες μέρες μας
δεν τις ζήσαμε ακόμα

Κι ό,τι πιο όμορφο
ό,τι πιο όμορφο θα 'θελα να σου πω
δεν στο 'πα ακόμα

This is the Greek translation of the poem of Nazim Hikmet from the great6 poet Giannis Ritsos.
It is one poem that i really like, and i feel glad i see it in TE.
The photo fit perfectly with it also.
TFS
Regareds

merhaba silan hanım

toprağın o güzel rengi ile bütünleşik ablamızın hızlı adımlarla yürüyüşünü çok güzel yakalamışsın...
ellerine sağlık

veysel

Hello Silan,
I am not sure exactly what this is, except for a woman walking somewhere. But I can say that it is a superbly composed picture with fantastic colours (are they real?)making the photo look like a painting.
Whatever it is, it's excellent.
Regards,
Gert

Selamlar...
Yolun sonunu bu resimle getirmişsiniz.Elinize sağlık.Köylü kadını resme değer katmış.
,Aziz BAYKUŞ

Merhaba Silan,
Kompozisyon ve renkleri ile harika bir fotoğraf.
Tebrikler.
Erhan

Merhaba Silan,
Cok iyi gormussun. Bu fotograf bana Robert Frost'un bir siirini hatirlatti. (Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, / And sorry I could not travel both ...diye baslayan.) Eline saglik.
Fusun

Meraba Silan Hanım,
İyi ki farketmişsiniz bu yol ayrımını bol kontrastlı harika bir doku çalışması olmuş, elinize sağlık..
Selnur

  • Great 
  • bwiti Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 787 W: 92 N: 1037] (6020)
  • [2007-11-27 12:44]

Great shot Silan ! I love the superb colors and your choice of framing, this woman is on this road as a plane which would get ready to unstick...
Congratulations for this one...

  • Great 
  • cak Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 285 W: 19 N: 29] (2981)
  • [2007-11-27 14:39]

yol ve tarla hatununun varlığı ile görsel ve anlam kazanmış

nefis bir fotoğraf olmuş bu... çok iyi görmüş, çok güzel fotoğraflamışsın... tebrikler...

korkut

Merhaba
renk katmanlarının geometrik etkis,bakış açısı,kompozisyon şahane
çok beğendim
elinize sağlık

selamlar silani
gözalıcı bir kare, renkler ve kadraj harika olmuş, fikir çok iyi
tebrikler,

  • Great 
  • nisko Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 445 W: 78 N: 285] (2425)
  • [2007-11-28 13:52]

hi silan,
wonderful presantation and matching of your photo with the poem,very well done!
kind regards
thodoris

Hello Deniz
Rust-red and gold are two of my favourite colours - in this shot they are rich and vibrant. Very effective composition , using the strong curving shapes and the figure is perfectly placed.
You have chosen the lovely poem very well to give extra meaning to the picture.
Beautiful! Best wishes Maggie

sevgili sılan,
büyüleyici renk ve dokuların ördüğü bu karene bakınca, kahramanın kendisi için yol çizilmiş bir tuvalin üzerinde yürüyor gibi
eline sağlık tebrikler
nezih

  • Great 
  • sayat Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 581 W: 4 N: 323] (2741)
  • [2007-12-07 4:16]

Süper bir kare bu, şiirsel bir anlatım. Elinize sağlık.

  • Great 
  • ARGI Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 759 W: 4 N: 369] (3388)
  • [2007-12-07 7:05]
  • [+]

Kalhmera Silan
How wonderfull the Nazim Hikmet Poem !! I indeed love Hikmet's work.And how amazing your
picture fits to his words. Composition is excellent and the colors fantastic and warm.
You know Silan I have in mind (for a few years now) to make an album based on Yannis Ritsos poems (images hiddrn within his poems), I'm sure that you know him.
I love your work Silan Bravo
Very good the new intro photo!
your Greek friend (I hope)
Argyris

Hello Silan,

this picture looks almost like a painting. I like the monochrome colors of this landscape very much.
Thanks for sharing,

Daniel

  • Great 
  • Tezic Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1763 W: 6 N: 3063] (15368)
  • [2007-12-24 12:54]

Merhaba,
çok güzel görülmüş ve yakalanmış, görüntü estetiği açısından da nefis bir kare... tebrikler...

  • Great 
  • parbo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1880 W: 15 N: 2172] (7789)
  • [2007-12-25 13:58]

Merhaba Silan,

You wonderfully captured a decisive moment. I like your model walk in hurry and cross road that dominantly divided by colors.

I wish Happy New Year to you and your family.

Regards,

Ertugrul

  • Great 
  • adores Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2761 W: 53 N: 4015] (13251)
  • [2007-12-29 8:17]

Hi Silan!
Very good one! I like the way you placed the woman and then, all those colours make the photo great and different. Very original work, I like it!

cok fazla anlam tasıyor verıyor ... fazla anlatıyor
ışık , komp. cok verımlı
sinema ya kayan fotograflardan
elınıze saglık

  • Great 
  • Faros Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 210 W: 16 N: 305] (3829)
  • [2008-01-04 5:21]

Hi Silan,
The compo is excellent, clear, strong and simple.
The mix of colours is perfect.
Sincere congrats,

Phil.

Bonsoir Silan
j'aime beaucoup les couleurs de cette photo, le point de vue et la présence du personnage qui arrive par la droite. Beau travail.
Xavier

Hi Silan,

Superbe composition, et très belles couleurs. C'est très bien vu, bravo !
Marie

  • Great 
  • Rustu (5)
  • [2008-01-10 13:12]
  • [+]

Harika.. Elinize saglik... Tebrikler...

Siirle uyum, ince zekanızın sanatcı yansıması olmuş..

Sevgiler.

Rüstü

Hi Deniz!
Fascinating shot with beautiful graphism andcolours. The lady walking toward the junction fits perfectly.
Regards
Andreas

Hi Silan, this is a very nice shot and the note had something more to the way to look this post, deep into introspection i love the reflexion it asks to the viewer ... You really created something with this shot.
Great one

seçimler önemlidir çoğu zaman... senin seçimin ise harika...

Hello Siran
Really great point of view,
the colours of the ground are excellent the red looks like its from a volvanic zone
Very well done
Regards
Daniel

Hi Deniz,

very original idea, I like a lot both composition and colors.

Very well done!

Gio

Bonjour Silan

belle image graphique de part ses oppositions de couleurs.
Nice shot, graphic with the oposition of colors
Dragut

Bonjour Silan.

Cette photo se regarde avec plaisir comme on regarde une belle peinture. J'aime la composition qui place des surfaces de couleurs en harmonie et le personnage dynamique comme perdu dans un no man's land.

Jacques

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  • mirarer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 487 W: 0 N: 363] (3089)
  • [2008-01-30 14:14]

Hi Silan,
Nice photo and great note. Good POV, beautiful colors and nice textures.
Regards,
Mirari

Sayın Sılan Deniz,
Kahve rengi resimde çok zor bir renktir,fakat siz bu kaverengi tonlarını bir sevinç yumağı yapmışsınız.Yağlıboya tablo lezzetinde fotoğraf,tebrik ediyorum sizi.

Hi Silan

An excellent photojob from a very good point of view. Welldone

Regards
Muhammad Hanif

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