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Me and my horses


Me and my horses
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Copyright: Avishek Khan (avishek_khan) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 91 W: 11 N: 63] (378)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-10-18
Categories: Artwork
Exposure: f/1.8, 1/100 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-10-31 23:20
Viewed: 879
Points: 35
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another one from the village Pachmura near Bishnupur. A lady artist with her Terra-cotta Horses displayed on her small verandah, eagerly waiting for the customers.
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simplicity at its best.perfect framing.Could have been more carefull when reducing the size to post in TE.I mean its a bit small.A slightly bigger one would looke more good.

Hi Avishek,
nice shot...I was there for a long time..when I was posted at Bankura Medical college...sweet memory of panchmura come again...
well done..
Manash

Nice picture and lovely details.
tfs
bishnu.

  • Good 
  • sayan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 591 W: 75 N: 693] (2605)
  • [2007-11-03 6:39]

Hello Avishek,

A very good attempt, but it misses something. First of all, I would like to take the full figure of the lady and not crop the leg. Then it would be better if you can take it Horizontally, meaning that the beautifull works of teracotta is cropped here. Finally a closer look at her with those terracotta horses in background would be interesting to see. It also lacks abit sharpness.

regards

Sayan

Avishek,
A nice portrait.
Your wide framing allows to see the colorful environment, and it is a good choice.
Nice job,
Regards,
JB.

  • Great 
  • MeAT Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 159 W: 38 N: 191] (1116)
  • [2008-02-21 19:22]

This is a nice shot, nicely laid out, various elements to look at. A bit out of focus though. The sharpness is not quite what it should be.

MeAT :)

  • Great 
  • colinb Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 277 W: 9 N: 111] (1260)
  • [2008-03-03 17:34]

Very nice shot. I like the pose you've caught. The scene is well composed. Thanks for sharing.

Hello Avishek,

The photo is well constructed; I like how the main subject, this woman, is in front of the many terracotta horse statues behind her. To make this even better, I would consider more saturation and contrast, a slight amount more sharpness and the inclusion of her missing foot. The earthy colour is a great feature of this photo. I am glad that you decided to frame it also.

Matt

  • Great 
  • mumek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2216 W: 27 N: 2399] (16076)
  • [2008-03-08 3:51]

Hi Avishek!
Nice capture of the lady artist sitting in front of her home with her terra-cota horses.
Very well done.
best regards
ziggy

Hi Avishek. Strong portrait tells a story. I like the way ou have included minimal but necessary items to put the image in context. The woman not looking at the camera works well. Best, Brat.

Hi,
good capture of a good subject. A bit more sharpness could add more.
best wishes.
sumit

Hello Avishek,

Joli portrait, très expressif, dans un beau décor.
Marie

Hi Avishek,
This is a nice portrait with good skin tone and a well managed lighting. I like the composition despite the bit on the leg and especially the worried expression on her face which tells so much about life. Well done!!

Regards.

Hi Avishek,
A brownish tonality attracted me, the lady artist's face is put on the most appropriate position in composition. Very decorous shot.
Best wishes, Hisashi

  • Great 
  • Nolme Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 146 W: 14 N: 544] (3774)
  • [2008-05-06 4:09]

What a beautiful expression of this woman who seems lost in time. great shot
marie

Hi Marek, good shot and interesting moment! Only the photo quality may be much better.

TFS and regards,
Philip

  • Great 
  • Sibani (4)
  • [2008-07-04 11:49]

a great conceptual thought.thank u

  • Great 
  • Ankush (49)
  • [2008-07-04 11:52]

simply incredible.thank u

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