Photographer’s Note
Picture taken at the Holocaust Memorial in Berlin, Germany. This extensive labarynth of raised blocks makes for a very somber and contemplative place to reflect on the tragedies of WWII.
Interestingly enough, no where is it explicitly stated that it this is a holocaust memorial. The only clue people have is the museum underneath it dedicated to the atrocities.
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Framboisilla
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(5402) 2007-10-28 0:54
Hi Paul,
The idea is good to make a graphic composition but I think it's too much centered and maybe something else. I've made a workshop to illustrate my thought.
Regards,
Stéphanie.
thor68
(5537) 2007-10-28 1:52
oh yes, the Holocaust Memorial, a great place for photography, but also very difficult regarding the light and the pov.
you did a good job, the composition is great with the girl with the red jacket as a colorful element in the grey surrounding,
but as stephanie said, i also think the centered pov does not work so well in this case, the WS is good.
best wishes & take care, thor.
Apex
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(328) 2007-11-03 9:16
Hey Paul.
Great pic. The red stands out in relation to the gray monotones of the monument.
Nice work.
Jeff.
Photo Information
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Copyright: Paul Goodwin (symbioticdep)
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 0 N: 12]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-s.gif)
(106) - Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2007-04-08
- Categories: Architecture
- Exposure: f/5.6, 1/200 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2007-10-28 0:03
