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Shoreline
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Copyright: Jennifer Spence (spence) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1628 W: 189 N: 267] (2236)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-06
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon PowerShot S50
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-07-24 3:16
Viewed: 2178
Points: 44
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The beach at Mentone, taken early in the morning. I liked the curves of the sand against the sea.
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  • Great 
  • carper Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 9323 W: 445 N: 14683] (51561)
  • [2004-07-24 3:18]

Lovely photo Jennifer,
I like the view, the colours the depth of the composition, Yes this is a good photo, very good job you did

Gorgeous Jennifer! What stunning colors and crisp details in this fine compositon. The diagonal line of the beach, the two triangles of green and blue separated by gold, all beneath those delicious clouds. I'm ready for a day at the beach! Fine work.

I agree te curves make the shot, and I agree with the others. I slight quibble is that I don't thing there's enough of the tree top right to provide a framing device, so I think I'd have cropped it altogether.

Very beautiful sight N the colors are very beautiful, likes a little less the branch on the top which disturbs a little I find especially me which likes the clouds and this very beautiful sky. Framing is perfect. beautiful work.

Beautiful shot Jennifer, it awakes to me Australian nostalgia.Everything is OK and on the right place in your picture.

Well composed. I like the reflections of the morning light. Restfull landscape.

  • Great 
  • ale Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 453 W: 86 N: 223] (1813)
  • [2004-07-24 7:04]

This is beautiful, what a place!
I like this warm light and the colours are great!
Very well done again!

You can see the bottom of the sea. Nice clear shot. Well done.

Very well cropped,I like the branches in top-right,well done,Jennifer!
You have some fine natural elements which you managed & captured all in a great way for creat this beautiful shot.very nice work with real & vivid colors.
I like it,you did great.

"I liked the curves of the sand against the sea"
Me too, Jennifer, me too ;-) Beautiful light and colors in this beachside view, and the way the shoreline meanders towards the horizon is indeed a strong element to create depth in the composition. I also like those thin branches hanging into the upper right corner of the frame. Very nice.

  • Great 
  • ChrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 8647 W: 911 N: 11403] (55278)
  • [2004-07-25 3:21]

Very well lit & composed. It looks almost tropical.

Hi Jenifer, this is a very attractive shot, the colors are really so beautiful and warm, and the sky is great. The pictur is so well framed by tree on top. I really like the colors and like you say the curves.

  • Great 
  • snsk Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 160 W: 157 N: 34] (757)
  • [2004-07-25 12:19]

Beautifull picture,nice composition and lovely colors/contrast and sharpness.The branches in foreground gives a good touch to the picture.
very welldone.

Nadir.

Beautiful scene Jennifer, the fluffy clouds just give the photo so much depth. The curve of the golden sand and the greenery on the right hand side complement each other for a great composition.

For me such landscapes are unusual, it's the first advantage. Moreover your composition is beautiful, the colors of the morning very quiet. Great shot :)

Beautiful shore, great perspective, beautiful clouds, great color and contrast, good light in picture.

Regards kaj Nielsen

  • Great 
  • mikee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 323 W: 119 N: 526] (1794)
  • [2004-08-15 18:42]

Good clear shot with wonderful colors, light and DoF. The eye follows the wonderfully curved shoreline. Well seen. Well done.

  • Great 
  • phd94 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 67 W: 22 N: 1] (305)
  • [2004-08-17 8:21]

Nice composition et beautiful colors.I like the curves too.

Nice composition with beautiful colours. This photo shouldn't work - the horizon is bisecting the photo - but it cheerful;y breaks the rule and completely gets away with it. Just goes to prove there are no hard-and-fast rules!

All your picture of sences are always beautiful. Good color with nice composition.

Nice one Jennifer. I'd be tempted to fiddle around with the curves within PS to see if we can boost the sky a touch though.

Regards,

Vic, Singapore.

Hi Jen again
This shot is also very well succeeded. good compo and great colours and very detailed. Wonderful atmosphere of holidays...
Regards Albrecht

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