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hard to be on diet in belgium with all the delicious chocolat shops..

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luisafonso (858) 2007-10-17 5:56

Well caught Canan. There is a story here and the connection between the sweets and the sweet is very good. Technically, I would have pushed the contrast a bit. It feels a bit "foggy" if you understand what I mean. Nice scene.

tatadalou (818) 2007-10-17 11:09

Hi Canan,
As you say, that's hard to resit to the temptation when you have all this choice behind you! The look of the woman towards the sweets is the catching point of your picture. As Luis says, the aspect of the seems a little bit foggy, surely because of the fact it's an interior scene, with hard light conditions.
I've tried a WS to correct a little this aspect and I profited to attempt to reduce a little the red tones, that I find too pregnant.
I hope the work I've done hasn't changed the spirit of your picture.
Regards,
Delphine

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noborders (14199) 2008-05-28 2:58

:)))
Funny the way you represent my city... Yes, chocolates are very tempting, eaten with moderation they are supposed to make us happy - and for me at least, it works !
Hope to see you once again,
Best regards,
(Gözünüze saglik !),
Cath.

pandoraTE (2317) 2008-10-30 11:47