Photographer’s Note
taken in merdeka square, During 50th merdeka celebrations.
in workshop tried to increase sharpness
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lctan
(1057) 2007-09-04 8:47
Hi aHMED,
What is your main focus in this picture please? If it is about the girl, it is not sharp, do not have good colours and also a lot of dark shadows in front. Also Poor viewpoint. Perhaps you can change your viewpoint next time before you shoot.
tfs
LC
ewanshamsudin
(345) 2007-09-04 9:16
I think your took the shot while walking without thinking. I think.
Let's see another one, Saad.
Photo Information
- Copyright: ahmed saad (asaad) (107)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2007-08-31
- Categories: Festivals
- Camera: CANON EOS 400D, Canon Zoom Lens EF 55-200mm 1:4.5-5.6 II
- Exposure: f/4.5, 1/25 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2007-09-03 23:29
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