One wake up again! Photo

Photographer’s Note

Maybe I had to post it on trek lens, but clear Hekla volcano, one of the most powerful, is sleeping quiet behind..My daughter in her wild wake up,Iceland effect, but so fragile and wonderful.I love you Garance, you are the most important!Thank you baby for this nice trip with you!

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Glint (3076) 2007-08-16 15:29

hello Pascal,
this is a charming picture despite its faults. For a start, we nearly lost your little daughter as moves almost out of the frame to the right.But we do see her and she look so cute. The landscape is beautiful too and very green but it looks like the land is sliding off the edge of the world. I think the horizon needs to be straightened....or is that an optical illusion?
regards
Bev
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berek (29049) 2007-08-17 1:11

Hi Pascal,
beautiful nature with cute child. I like your composition. have a nice day.
B.Erek

Delfin (1497) 2008-01-17 12:16

hi Pascal
it is a beautiful place on your photo and the light is wonderful.. and of course, kids always add to a composition.
But why is she walking out straight of the frame? why didn't you give her more space? She is so close to the border that you couldn't even crop your photo to make a horizon line horizontal.
Best,
Olga