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Smoke of Coal


Smoke of Coal
Photo Information
Copyright: Cem Hakan Ozaslan (Ozaslan) Silver Note Writer [C: 7 W: 3 N: 15] (162)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-04-29
Camera: CANON EOS 400D, 75-300mm Canon EF 1:4-5.6 III (58mm)
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-08-15 15:50
Viewed: 432
Points: 32
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Mangal kömürü (Torakçılık) yaparak geçimini sağlayan insanların çalışma ve yaşam koşulları gerçekten çok zor..
Nefes almanın mümkün olmadığı, ciğerlerin dumanla dolduğu o yerde yine de sigara elden düşmüyor.
Bir tuhaf çelişki..


The working and living conditions of these people who are earning their lives by producing the charcoal is very hard...
However, they smoke non-stop where it is not possible to breath properly, where the lungs are getting filled with the coal dust..
that is very ironic...

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You got him. The Marlboro Man of Turkey. Tar on the inside and tar on the outside. A blackened life against a gray world and it shows in the coal glint of his eyes. -Hugh

Merhaba,
This works very well I think. It is an interesting face that tells a story.
The skin tones pop off the screen compared to the grey of the coal dust everywhere.
Nicely Spotted
Cheers
Mark

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  • erel Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 745 W: 0 N: 338] (9015)
  • [2007-08-15 21:34]

merhaba
Çok hoş bir portre ışık ve ifade çok iyi tebrikler EREL

Merhaba...Excellent portrait...Bravo...

merhaba cem,
what an excellent portrait...
the details are great, the man is so natural...
there is some uncertainty in his eyes, or he simply is so tired of his work at the moment...
cigarette is a superb "catching" element but if it were captured with a snaky smoke it would be even better...
anyway - i like a lot this portrait...
best wishes, j.

sevgili hakan,
netliği ve renkleri çok etkileyici, başarılı bir portre
eline sağlık tebrikler
nezih

Merhaba Hakan,
Adam sigarasından bir fırt çekmiş, tam ağzından çıkarırken kalakalmış. Duman henüz ciğerlerinde, dudaklarının arasından çıkma fırsatı bulamadan birbirinizi yakalamışsınız. Elin duruşu, gözlerin kısılıp kaşların aşağı doğru akıp gitmesi, anın donuşunu pekiştiriyor.
Gözüne sağlık.

merhaba
güzel bi çalışma
etkileyici bakışlar
tebrikler
murat

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  • nbj Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 487 W: 0 N: 54] (1577)
  • [2007-08-16 3:45]

a perfekt portrait. the colors, the face (beautiful!), the eyes, the sharpness...everything works in this picture.

Hi Cem!
Fantastic portrait shot. Great use of the zoom. Well done.
Regards
Andreas

Merhaba,
Müthiş bir portre,anlatımı çok güçlü.Uzun uzun seyrettiriyor,uzun uzun düşündürüyor...
Tebrikler
Deniz

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  • suhan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 856 W: 0 N: 508] (3516)
  • [2007-08-17 22:24]

Seyrek ama kaliteli fotoğraflar geliyor sizden. daha sık katılmanız dileğiyle...
tebrikler
m/s

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  • canan Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 271 W: 0 N: 41] (945)
  • [2007-08-20 1:20]

eni sonu bir traktör altında kalmaya bakmıyor mu zaten iyisi mi çeksin içine bulduğu tek keyfi..

Hi Cem
I see you are a portrait photographer, something i am not very good at.
But i like this shot a lot, the dirty fingers and face + the ironic fact of the guy smoking when he finally can breathe real air. (I am a smoker my self and would probably do the same)
Good depth
Harry

Merhaba Hakan,
Good portrait,you've wait for his hand to take the cigaret to click...good timing!perfect focus,nice quality,
have a nice week end,
vincent

Merhaba Hakan ! This photo is splendid IMO, so human ; thanks to your book I can understand better the circumstances in which the photos were take (just checked on the net and found many of the photos of this book here), maybe could you add the link to your note (...and also, more of those photos that you took there : amazing place, amazing faces, not easy lives !)
You did such a great job with this project, I'm full of admiration !
Best regards,
Selam ve sevgiler,
Cath.

son derece doga,ic burkan ve cok anlamli muthis bir yakin cekim bu,
ellerinize saglik,
iffe

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