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Some Belgian fields and our shadow...

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KLB (18279) 2007-08-08 6:37

Hello Aude

It's a funny capture, well seen.
The graphism is very interessing.
However, I would have cropped on the top to remove the two spots in the corner, and perhaps it would be good to enhance the fields. I tried a WS to give my vision, hope you don' mind.

Regards,
Karine

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Heaven (0) 2007-08-08 6:46

Hi Aude!

Nice and original picture with interesting geometry. Well seen, and well captured, especially the composition is good, although I fully agree with the critique of Karine (KLB). I think her WS is really an improvement of the picture, although I would not accentuate the saturation of the green fields. Green is always delicate to handle with digital cameras and I think your green fields are ok.

Kind regards, and many nice flights!
Markus

Valerka (8159) 2007-08-08 8:11

Hi, Aude,
What an unusual shot, though the idea isn't new at all! The field is so trimmed.
And the shadow?...This is what is to be at the right moment at the right place and of course be prompt and observant.
TFS
Valerka:)

partha (13667) 2007-08-08 10:01

Hi Aude ,
WOW, the shadow tells everything. Nice concept and beautiful execution.
Regards.
partha

Zolive (1654) 2007-08-08 11:19

Bonjour Aude
Magnifique photo. J'adore cette ombre qui plane sur le damier blond et vert. Je pense que tu avais embarqué dans la nacelle ?
Félicitations.
Olivier

Stepan (27175) 2007-08-26 0:39

Cette ombre sur ce damier fonctionne très bien. Le cadrage est nickel, même si tu aurais pu enlever le petit morceau de vert en haut.
En tout cas, très graphique.
Stéphane

smarcell (14653) 2007-10-22 12:58

This is really nice, Aude. A perfect composition, and then the special touch is of course the shadow !
I would just crop the thin dar green line on the very top, which is a small disturbing element to the perfection of the composition

brevbrev14 (372) 2007-10-26 4:40