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the deliveryman


the deliveryman
Photo Information
Copyright: Damien SALVIA (BlkDaffyDuck) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 149 W: 18 N: 81] (383)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-07-10
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon D70, 18-70mm AF-S DX 3.5 - 4.5 Nikkor
Exposure: f/9.0, 1/400 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-07-30 1:39
Viewed: 761
Points: 5
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Salut Damien,

Avant tout bienvenu sur TE.
J'aimes bien le cadrage général de la photo, mais pour moi la partie inférieure trop sombre n'apporte pas grand chose.

De plus je trouves que le ciel bleu occultes un peu les autres couleurs de ta photo.
Je te proposes un petit WS.

Amicalement.

Yves

Hi Damien - welcome to TE, nice enough depiction of daily life, I like the fact that there are no other elements in the alley, such as cars or other people, there is too much shadow though, maybe cropping 15% from the bottom and 10% from the right might work better. I tried a workshop.

Hi Damien,

Welcome to TE. Nice posting, excellent lighting and compostion. TFS

Fara

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