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Just a girl in Benfica neighbourhood. Hair done to the latest fashion :)
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wolf38
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(13069) 2007-06-17 5:59
Hello January. A wonderful Portrait. Beautiful colors, good composition. Great. Best regards, Wolfgang.
alina
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(401) 2007-06-17 20:01
Hello Jan,
It could be a very nice portrait with few adjustments if you I ask me. I would crop and get rid of the plastic pots etc. on the right side of the little girl. You may use the tree trunk as your border. I think that empty area weakens the portrait. One last thing, I wish you had include the complete left hand, but oh well, next time..
marine (9) 2007-06-20 4:35
Even croppen Mangoman en het meisje is om te stelen. Niet zeuren over die hand die er niet helemaal opstaat.
alkramer
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(0) 2007-06-21 15:51
Hi Jan,
Great portrait,a very natural posing of that little girl.Besides,it has beautiful colours and sharpness.Regards,Alberto
dareco
(17104) 2007-07-29 12:47
Sure do love that latest fashion. Exactly how long does it take for moms to do this. If you had six daughters it must be a full time job. Always amazes me! lol A beautiful photo!!!
fritzi007
(2638) 2009-02-21 9:14
Hallo Jan!
Nette Person, gutes Bild, fehlerlos!
Viele Grüsse
Wolfgang
Photo Information
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Copyright: Jan Vranken (Mangoman)
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(279) - Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2007-06-11
- Categories: Daily Life
- Exposure: f/4.9, 1/100 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2007-06-17 5:29
