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jpinkham
(848) 2007-06-02 23:21
The flowers are wonderful, Selene. A couple of things that would improve this even more. First, add a note telling us what we are seeing, especially that building in the background. Second, I would suggest showing even more of the field and less of the sky. In terms of composition, you could almost cut this picture in half without losing anything. But a lower horizon would probably work even better.
marioana
(2178) 2007-06-03 5:18
Hi Selene.
I probably agree with Jim that it needs the sky cropped a little as the best parts are the flowers and the old ruin, and there's no great clouds to justify so much sky, but I still love the composition and colour and I like the inclusion of the ruin. Well done.
Regards, Steve.
Photo Information
- Copyright: Selene Vargas (selenevar) (101)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2007-00-00
- Categories: Daily Life, Nature
- Camera: Canon EOS 500
- Exposure: f/8, 1/200 seconds
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2007-06-02 21:23
Discussions
- To Charo: Hola (1)
by selenevar, last updated 06-04 09:22 - To jpinkham: Jim (2)
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