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Intensive Colours


Intensive Colours
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Copyright: Andreas Achleitner (Achleitner) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 119 W: 0 N: 72] (729)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-05-17
Categories: Architecture
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-05-21 15:26
Viewed: 551
Points: 35
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I was travelling from Graz to Gleisdorf and passed by at this industrial building with boxes at the end. Together with the yellow wall and the blue sky the colours had an effect on me. I stoped and took a picture. Maybe I break the motto of TE with it, but I liked it and want to give it a try. Maybe someone likes it too. The line of the roof is not very straight. I tried to chance it with PP but then the boxes where not really straight any more so I left it as I took it and just changed the saturation.

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Hi Andreas,
Beautiful graphics here, and very good idea to take the photo of this image. Lively colors indeed. You created art out of nothing. Well seen and taken. Congrats,
Deniz

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  • Edern Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 41 W: 17 N: 151] (496)
  • [2007-05-21 16:17]

Hello Andreas,
It's a great composition of abstract art from everyday view. I like the volumes created by the boxes and the green lines at the to of the wall. The little piece of sky above the wall is very good too.
You were right to stop.
Keep on looking (but drive safely !)
Jean-Michel

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  • Stan Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 380 W: 11 N: 279] (2766)
  • [2007-05-21 16:18]

Hello Andreas,
Very nice graphic composition with strong colors. Well seen!
Serge

To appreciate the release, good the cut and the contrast of the colors.

hello Sergio

Hi Andreas.
If the boxes had different colours it could look like Tetris! I agree with your note, colours are stunning!

Sabrina

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  • jmdias Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1224 W: 181 N: 1556] (6641)
  • [2007-05-27 17:23]

andreas

very nice colors, the way you put the shapes is very nice too

Jorge

Hi Andreas,
I've seen some of your recent work and
only decised to critique on this one as
it's one of my favourite kind of framings,
very graphical and minimalist at the same
time with only 2-3 colours involved.
Don't worry about lines not being straight,
though, if you want to straighten them, it's
quite easy in PS itself, or using a special
software for correcting lens distortion.
Well spotted, this one!
Robi

Bravo , l'idée est vraiment originale , j'aime le cadrage et la compo ..

Beautiful colors and nice graphical composition! Regards, Doug

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  • lyn Silver Star Critiquer [C: 26 W: 0 N: 2] (139)
  • [2007-07-23 10:27]

Great composition by boxes and lines with vivid colors.
It reminds me "Tetris". :)
Good work.

*** lyn ***

Andreas,
You've certainly got an eye for these graphical divisions - it's apparent in many shots in your gallery. Although here we have crates, walls and sky, the same divisions are often made in your nature shots, perhaps grass, trees, sky, highlithing these divisions by your point of view.
This one makes me think of a bar chart - it's almost like the green line near the top represents the monthly crate target. Looks like they're falling a little short!
Regards
Colin

Great shot, quite abstract, which I like a lot. You could maybe reduce a bit the yellow saturation which affected a bit the white clouds. On my screen, bottom of the clouds appear a bit "yellowish" !
The blue sky shows a bit of noise, this appears mostly when applying PP on JPEG files, as they are coded on 8bits/color. This happened often to me on blue skies when adjusting the curves or levels.

By the way, I don't really get it why you would break the TE motto with this picture.

Nice. You've got a very good eye for artistic composition in your pictures.
-Pascal-

Hi Andreas,

great photographic eye! Simple but with an extraordinary result.

Compliments!

Gio

great observation that makes you an abstract photographer. I love the up and down contour of the boxes, it's very musical. janos

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  • THY Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 94 W: 64 N: 98] (1541)
  • [2007-12-13 7:02]

Nice colour composition.
I love this photo.
Thanks.

THY

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  • dbar Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 50 W: 4 N: 60] (476)
  • [2008-05-02 2:19]

Hi Andreas,

Excellent shot. I think green and yellow colors match perfectly, so any composition containing these two colors has good chances to become successful. Your photo has also nice geometry so the result is absolutely successful.

Nice work,
Regards
Dimitris

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  • boa Silver Star Critiquer [C: 19 W: 0 N: 2] (175)
  • [2008-05-08 11:49]

Hi Andreas,
very cool shot. I think the sky in the top make it even better. It almost looks like a Magritte painting.
Regards
Boa

Hi Andreas,
nice colours, indeed. Hope to see more from you soon. Ivan

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