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Riverain
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Copyright: Dimi Reider (fafnir) (34)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2002-11
Categories: Nature
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2003-05-24 9:21
Viewed: 793
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The [in]famous Yarkon river / creek of Tel Aviv, on a rainy November morning
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VERY interesting. Looks to me like something out of "Heart of Darkness" or "Apocalypse Now" with Kurtz waiting at the end of the river somewhere. Well captured and your composition is nice as well. Good job!

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  • ornis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 569 W: 268 N: 69] (1271)
  • [2003-05-24 10:35]

Beautiful composition. I like specially the wooden landing (or fishing) stage on the left and the clear reflections on the river. Grainy water (rain) is nice too.

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  • dovi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 396 W: 84 N: 33] (1061)
  • [2003-05-25 7:06]

This is really nice shot, but again I miss some depth it's too flat.

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  • mick69 (67)
  • [2003-05-28 7:23]

The Yarkon river, viewed in such a way I could never imagine... Somewhat agree with Dovi, a little flat, but I wonder if the same atmosphere could have been rendered with more opening.

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