Photographer’s Note
I took this picture last week at the town of Chuao, a small village famous for its cacao plantations where some of the finest cocoa beans in the world are produced. It’s located in the northern coastal range of Venezuela.
The village is surrounded by mountains and dense rainforests in its south side, and by the Caribbean Sea on its northern side; there are no roads to access the site, thus I got there by small boat from the neighbouring Puerto Colombia.
This little girl was playing/bathing by herself in a detour of the main river, in front of her mother and a friend.
It called my attention that stare of the girl, she doesn’t turned a hair during the brief minutes we were there.
Handheld with Image Stabilizer (IS), at 11:40 am, good weather.
Increased contrast, resized for TE and sharpen.
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Manamo
(3472) 2007-05-14 10:26
Hello Jose Miguel,
I'm glad you took the time to upload a second picture today:D This one is very different from the first one. The contrasts are terrific, it gives her eyes such an intense look. She looks so serious for a little girl.
My deception, you stood high in front of her instead of folding your knees and get down to her height. However, maybe you would not have gotten such an intense look by getting down...I don't know.
Take care!
Marc
TopGeo
(21711) 2007-05-14 10:41
Hi Jose Miguel
Any way it's a nice work with very good info note,an excellent portaite so sensational with sensibility ,serene,childlike face. Why; B&W... Well come and thanks very much for this,
tfs Georgios
luiscar
(3282) 2007-05-14 10:54
Hola jose miguel, veo que has colgado tu 2 foto en BN, muy lograda la escala de grises y resolucion perfecta, felicidades, un saludo
Paolo
(40694) 2007-05-14 11:36
Hi Josè Miguel, wonderful portrait, with a perfect black and white and high quality.
you captured the child in a great moment.
thanks, ciao
smash2707
(2516) 2007-05-14 15:40
Hola José Miguel. Buena elección del blanco y negro y buen contraste que hace resaltar la expresión y la mirada de la niña. Saludos, Yvonne
delic
(6735) 2007-05-14 16:06
Hello Jose Miguel,
Great candid portrait that suits B&W so well. You have captured the little girl's innocence nicely. Perhaps getting down to her eye level would work better. Great job, something I still have to learn.
Best wishes,
Hakan
Claudine
(0) 2007-05-14 20:02
Hello JM :)! I'm glad to see you here too! I don't have many pictures on this site as TN keeps me occupied a bit :-) This is a wonderful portrait of such a nice girl! What a beauty she is and you captured her soul perfectly. Look at these eyes!!! They are magnificent. This is a good use of B&W, a great post. Thanks!
Claudine
dip
(12550) 2007-05-15 3:31
Hi Jose,
Very good the portrait of this beautiful girl.
Good use made of the light,the sharpness is also very good!
Greetings from Germany
Dimitris.
Cretense
(55812) 2007-05-15 6:34
Hola Jose Miguel y bienvenido a TE!
Aqui nos muestras un excelente retrato de este nino, una toma muy natural y muy impresionante. Has capturado, toda la inocencia y la "dulzura" de este nino. El b&n funciona muy bien. Felicidades!
Un saludo desde Grecia,
Hercules
Marcelo_Almeida
(1044) 2007-05-15 8:00
Hola José Miguel,
Belo retrato, marcante a expressão no rosto da menina, a conversão para o PB está muito bem feita.
Parabéns,
abs,
Marcelo Almeida
dumaresq_ca
(1880) 2007-05-15 8:11
Bonjour Jose Miguel,
un joli portrait avec de belles qualités photographiques dont cette belle netteté et ces contrastes qui servent bien le sujet. Ce dernier apparaît au naturel, ce qui est idéal, et ses yeux vont directement vers ceux du spectateur et on se sent concerné par ce regard.
Bravo!
Yves
sebinho342
(18736) 2007-05-15 10:10
Hi Jose, hmm yes i love this one, so remote place as you depict how to go there in your note, a pleasure youshare it with us.
For sure this cacao may be a very good one considering the perfect place ie rainy and heat.
Your portrait here is beautiful, from a high POV, your heigh on this little girl that has a beautiful glance at your cam. Love also her hair ;)
BW is an excellent choice
congratulations, your gallery starts very well
Cricri
(43030) 2007-05-15 14:49
Hi José et bienvenu sur TE
Adorable petit bout, j'aime comment elle te regarde le doigt dans la bouche, toute naturel avec ses cheveux bouclé, beau portrait en N/B
good evening
cricri
stego
(22350) 2007-05-15 16:54
Hola Jose Miguel,
Retrato encantador! Su mirada curiosa y e el dedo en la boca la hacen muy expresiva. El fondo resulta muy bien en destacar la niña, asi como el B&N. La nitidez es soberbia.
Saludos, José.
sabyasachi1212
(19546) 2007-05-15 23:35
Hi Jose,
Excellent portrait, good choice of B&W, love the way she looks up at you. Fantastic details. Good to see your work on TE.
With Greetings from India
Sabyasachi
cobraphil8
(11650) 2007-05-16 10:41
Hi Jose Miguel,
A still better second post in my eyes than the first, even if it is in another style. The quality of this photograph is very good but it is especially the attitude of this small girl who is fabulous.
A portrait full with emotions and then special mention for its haircut.
I add you to my list of anglophone members because the quality of the first two photographs and your criticisms are very good.
Regards
Philippe
wgreis
(5980) 2007-05-16 12:31
José Miguel,
a escolha pelo P&B foi acertada. O componente humano valorizou sobremaneira a foto.
Muito bom!
Wagner.
Wanda1
(10923) 2007-05-17 1:59
Hi Jose,
A wonderful portrait of this child, you have good eye contact from her! Nice black and white tones and good sharpness. I like the textures especially on her hair.
Regards
Wanda
claire526
(1261) 2007-05-17 11:17
Hi Jose,
Very nice b&w portrait. Shapness, focus, composition and details. Very interesting candid shot, nice catch. I like the curls ;)
Cheers,
Claire
P-S-I-G
(24482) 2007-05-17 16:04
Hola Jose Miguel,
Un muy bueno retrato. Me gusta mucho el blnaco y negro.
Un saludo,
Fabrice
lilimih33
(9872) 2007-05-17 20:05
Hello Jose Miguel!
Nice black & white portrait!
Good clarity and nice perspective!
Excellent done!
Lili
ahmetgedikli
(21823) 2007-05-18 2:19
Hi Jose,
Excellent contrast, nice POV. Good colors, composition and framing are wonderful. Congratulations.
Ahmet
markstaples
(15670) 2007-05-18 3:04
Hi Jose Miguel
An excellent portrait with an excellent expression captured. It has been framed nicely, exposure is spot on and I like the conversion to black and white. Nice work.
Best wishes
Mark
kiwi_explorer
(12195) 2007-05-18 5:34
Hi Jose,
Lovely portrait ... well captured facial expression. Nice curly hair .... good overall contrast. Good job! tfs
Cheers,
Renier
Floydian
(30970) 2007-05-18 9:47
Hi Jose,
Wonderful, without words. Children as such a great subject to photograph but still you have to find the right composition, and here you sure had...absolute great shot..!!!
I think that b&w even enhanced the photo more...perfect.
Have a nice weekend, Henk
clic
(4063) 2007-05-18 10:44
Hello Jose Miguel
You could have title "Curley" !!
What a sweet expression and a judicious choice of b&w for this fine portrait!
Take care.
Robert
AiresSantos
(41920) 2007-05-19 3:58
Hola Jose,
Very nice capture of this kid. Very good portrait in black and white format. I like the details and his expression.
Very well done
Aires
PS - thanks for your visit
brevbrev14
(372) 2007-05-19 4:34
Hi Jose, very good portrait of this beautiful baby!
the look and the eyes are wonderful...great expression you have captured here!
bravo!
ciao!
Valeria
feather
(49858) 2007-05-19 6:51
Welcome to TE Jose.
This is a beautiful portrait and I feel the high POV you chose actually works well in this case so we get the full benefit of those huge glistening eyes. Her finger-sucking pose is an added bonus.
Kath
Charo
(31665) 2007-05-19 15:45
Hola Jose Miguel,
Ya veo que sigues triunfando, lo mereces.
Excelente retrato de este niño en esa actitud tan simpática y expresiva.
Muy acertado el B/N y estupenda definición.
Felicitaciones
Saludos
Charo
Zelanda
(5692) 2007-05-20 17:20
Hola Jose Miguel,
La infancia siempre es bonita cuando nos muestra a un niño que parece feliz.
Estupenda foto de gran definición.
Saludos cordiales
Zelanda
maximage
(13347) 2007-05-21 17:04
Hello Jose-Miguel,
Très beua portrait plein de sensibilité et d tendresse.
Bienvenue sur TE.
Amitiés
max
jmcl
(13721) 2007-05-21 17:49
Hi Jose Miguel,
What intensity you have captured in such a small body .. and I think made more powerful with the black and white .. you tower over her .. and here she is with such a wonderful inquisitiveness about you .. wonderful image.
take care,
John
pablominto
(40488) 2007-05-22 1:19
Hello JM,
A strong portrait with good details!
Excellent definition and a fine tonal range in the grayscale...
Her expression is a mystery to me, maybe a kind of curious sceptisism..?
Work is well done in a fine composition!
Greetings,
Pablo -
nadine432
(1128) 2007-05-22 10:36
magnifique portrait
le n&b était ce qu'il fallait pour cette photo,
très beau cadrage
Nad
isa
(1964) 2007-05-23 21:08
Hola José Miguel,
Que lindo niño, precioso su cabello y mirada.
Extraordinário encuadramiento y definición.
Excelente trabajo, felicitaciones.
SAludos cordiales,
Isa
jhm
(82297) 2007-05-24 7:17
Hello Jose Miguel,
Nice black and white portrait, certainly when this his children, do my think to my child years, the eyes and the finger in the mouth are very lovely composition. Very well done. TFS.
Best regards,
John.
robob
(3640) 2007-05-24 11:01
Hello Jose Miguel,
Je pense qu’il n’est pas encore trop tard pour te souhaiter la bienvenue sur TrekEarth ;-)
J’aime beaucoup ce portrait en B&W de ce jeune enfant avec une jolie expression très naturelle.
Excellente lumière et netteté !
Amicalement et à bientôt,
Robert
JPlumb
(3153) 2007-05-31 1:58
Hi Jose Miguel, very nice portrait of this little girl. You certainly had her attention. She has a very innocent look with that finger in her mouth, I expect she forgot it was even there, and her stare is great.
Thanks, John
saguzar
(862) 2007-06-05 17:47
Hola José Miguel.
Que bueno ver tu galería aqui en TE. Me encanta esa niñita, con su carita inocente y ese peinado! Excelente trabajo
Saludos
Hernán
MLINES
(10868) 2007-06-05 23:22
Hi Jose. Good composition of a local at this town of Chuao. The hairstle is certainly cute to see. Ideal for TrekEarth contribution. Murray.
faubry
(32281) 2007-06-06 4:10
hello Jose, very amazing portrait, very good contrast, she is very very serious? well done
soon
francine
siolaw
(25722) 2007-06-08 10:35
Hola Jose Miguel,
Nice portrait with good conversion to B&W, sharp details and cute expression well captured...
TFS
LAurent
dilane
(10228) 2007-06-08 18:27
Bonsoir Jose Miguel,
regard qui a soutenu le tien, mais qui va aussi droit dans le nôtre. sourcils légèrement froncés qui marquent un soupçon d'inquiètude tout en suçant un de ses doigts d'une manière décontractée. elle est trop mignonne cette gamine. belle photo avec une belle netteté. bonne soirée.
daniel
happypoppeye
(4060) 2007-06-12 20:34
Great catch. Love the curly hair and innocent expression. Good composition and contrast with the B&W format. Nice work.
surel
(1024) 2007-06-14 18:42
Hi Jose,
great expression on her face,especially her eyes,really great.And I loved the back,it is going with her hair.TFS.
Best wishes,
Hare
edytungkal
(4519) 2007-06-20 2:35
Hello Jose,
Very well b&w photo...
Great expression from the girl and you have captured it on the right moment. Perfect job and tfs
greetings
daniel
lasscor
(7637) 2007-06-20 18:42
Hi Jose Miguel,
Lovely b&w expressive portrait.
Lovely cute little girl.
Very beautiful glance and gesture.
TFS,
Corinne
fkokol
(1614) 2007-07-09 13:40
Beautiful portrait with impressive expression. BW is great choice. greetings,
figen
dareco
(17104) 2007-09-05 0:47
Such a beautiful little child. She has a wonderful expression, very curious. A really 'natural' portrait of this little one. TFS
smitha
(356) 2007-09-05 20:35
Hello Jose,
I have always been attracted by people's faces in photographs, especially kids.This photo of yours is an excellent portrait capturing her innocent expression, the nonchalant look she gives to the photographer who has suddenly shown an interest in her. Superb shot and thanks for sharing it.
Smitha.
touristdidi
(8561) 2007-09-05 21:40 [Comment]
Benedict
(7062) 2007-09-10 23:39
hola JM,
una foto muy linda!
the clarity, resolution and sharpness are superb! a great BW work of the finest quality!
un saludo desde Los Angeles.
benedict
ps- and those cocoa seeds after processing are exported to Hershey's, huh?
Photo Information
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Copyright: Jose Miguel Cisneros (JoseMiguel)
(860) - Genre: People
- Medium: Black & White
- Date Taken: 2007-05-06
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: Canon S3 IS, 58 mm UV
- Exposure: f/3.5, 1/40 seconds
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2007-05-14 10:07
- Favorites: 2 [view]
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