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The old and the new


The old and the new
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Copyright: alessandra torri (ale) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 453 W: 86 N: 223] (1813)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-05-16
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 4300
Exposure: f/7.6, 1/223 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2004-05-28 11:54
Viewed: 1083
Points: 21
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These are the little old church and the new fountain of Grimoldo

In the WS you can see another view of this church, the mountain in background is named Alben.

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To Cool-ice: Hope you will not take these words badlyale 1 05-29 03:14
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  • Zanni Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1002 W: 153 N: 1268] (5797)
  • [2004-05-28 11:59]
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Ale, i tuoi punti di vista hanno sempre un certo effetto su di me. Beautiful mountain church.

Fine symmetrical composition, Alessandra, and a good capture of the constrasting architectural elements. Very good colors, and I like how the shadow of the roof escapes the symmetry a little. Well done!

The WS looks spectacular with the mountain on the left. It definitely could stand as a TE posting in its own right.

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  • mikee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 323 W: 119 N: 526] (1794)
  • [2004-05-28 12:54]

Another typical church of the beautiful Bergamo area. Well balanced, good captured and well framed. I like your idea. The picture seems to suffer a bit, on the left hand side, of post processing distortion. However, this is a wonderful composition. I love your workshop as well.

oooh this is great, again your workshop is my favourite. it has such a strong composition way stronger than the standing photo when you ak me... but i'll look again tommorow, i'm not in a right stade of mind i quess ;)

A very nice angle you've chosen here.
I like the fountain in the middle of the stairs and then the view "up there" to the church.
I also saw your WS, but why not post it on TE
another day, this one is splendid too !!

Hi Ale, you come out once again with a very good composition. I am not sure about the fountain though..

To tell you the truth I prefer the photo you've posted in the wokshop, but the tight crop in this one is also very nice.

Both photographs are very nice. I like the point of view in this one. I like the perspective in it. Even the sky seems to have a nice perspective. I am drawn up and then back into this image. Or it really seems to be popping out at me. Perhaps it could be a little bit sharper but both the contrast and color are very nice. Nicely done on both images.

To be frank, Ale, I think that it's not your best one here on TE.
And I explain my point of view :
- there is a lack of place in the four sides and all is too much tight in the frame,
- architectural photos are among the more difficult to do and the technical imperfections don't forgive : here, the perspective with the distortion on the both sides of the wall throw off balance the whole photo,
- the roof is cut by the frame on both sides,
- it's a pity that the fountain is in front of the stairs and hide them,
- the light is a bit flat.
As postive points, the symetry is well seen and the textures, particularly the stone, are nice.
For me, it can be a nice image if you take it from a more elevated point and if you wait for having a more interesting light (maybe in the late afternoon).
I am sorry to be so strong, Ale, but I really think that it's the best way to progress, for all of us. And when one of your photo is nice, I also said it to you frankly.
Hope you will not take these words badly ;-)

Wonderful picture Ale ! I like very much the angle of view and the composition !
Good colours, light and shadow in the house.
Very weel done !
Congratulations

Very speciel. Excellent symetri composition good angel, Great light and contrast, good color.

I like your pic. and I owe you point from your last, promis, be back tomorow as the 2. I give point, run out again:-))

Hi Alessandra,

I think than the angle of sight makes it possible to emphasize well the geometry of the elements which, associated the prospect for the unit gives almost the giddiness. Sympathetic to have preserved an end of mountain to locate the action.
also the evocation Greek temple plait me ; in short, I like this new photograph Alessandra.

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  • Piotr Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1004 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2004-05-30 9:27]

Nice photo, very modern fountain I think, well done

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