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Intruder


Intruder
Photo Information
Copyright: Joao Paiva (jpaiva) (267)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-03-29
Categories: Event
Exposure: f/4.1
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-04-08 14:07
Viewed: 442
Points: 3
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The moment when the people leave and the birds comeback.
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Bonjour Joao,

Good observation but it could have been improved.
Better than saying how I'd have liked to see that picture, I've tryed to make a workshop with a different point of view:
I've cropped to see only the gras, made the contrast stronger and added a frame.

Amicalement - Viviane

Hi Joao,
The grass pattern is very interesting and the bird in the middle, I agree that cropping would be helpful here, check my ws. Is that a restaurant?
Regards,
Gordana

Interesting idea. Too bad the bird did not position him/herself in a better spot for your shot.
I like the sqaure stones for composition here

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