Photographer’s Note
maybe it is full of mistakes but i really like atmosphere in this picture..
the Title is borrowed from Fish' live album..because it's my first association..
have a nice evening and night
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ben4321
(9807) 2007-04-01 17:28
Never mind mistakes Angelina, as you say, atmosphere is everything. The only thing I'd pick you up on here is the slight tilt to the left; a slight rotation to correct the lean of the building and have the black line cutting vertically through the frame would improve things.
Everything else, I like; the massive flare, the blur, that pitch blackness taking up 1/3 of the frame, but most of all the light. Without that golden light, this wouldn't have worked.
An unusual image, and all the better for that.
Cheers,
Ben
adamasao1
(466) 2007-04-01 22:44
Hello Angelina
I, too, reckon it would be better to have the line vertical.
That said, the shot does have a great feel - the flare of the sunlight is great, the depth of field makes for an interesting shot. Maybe a note with some more info next time?
Nice work.
Cheers
Adam
Jason_teale
(703) 2007-04-01 23:19
Yup a little more tilt would be great. With shots like this I tend to use the guides within photo shot to make the photos straight. It is something to keep in mind when lines are a dominant factor in your shot. As for the rest, it is great. Never mind what is in focus or out of focus, this truly does have a great atmosphere. I did a workshop to straighten out the sign.
Photo Information
- Copyright: Neeraja Preeti Dutta (marbles) (76)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2007-02-07
- Categories: Architecture
- Exposure: f/8, 1/500 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2007-04-01 17:22
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