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Sunrise II


Sunrise II
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Copyright: Jorge Muller (Bruno40) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1032 W: 91 N: 1110] (4824)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-01-28
Categories: Ruins
Camera: konica Minolta Dimage A1, ND8
Exposure: f/8, 1/400 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Travelogue: India 2007
Theme(s): Sunsets & Sunrises, ** Noborder's favourite India photos (I), My Top Photos, Trekearth Book 2008: Places [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-03-31 6:34
Viewed: 1999
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 102
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Sunrise at Gadi Sagar, Jaisalmer
Please read note in my previous picture?

Thanks to all for the comments
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Oh my, what a lovely captured sunrise, it's adorable, beautiful, magical, great contrast between the golden tones and the black, oh I've just noticed the swans on the right, very very beautiful composition.
Regards,
Gordana

magnifique composition ! tout est superbement étudié entre les cygnes au premier plan, l'arche, le couché de soleil et ce batiment posé sur l'eau il n'y a vraiment rien à redire

Great photo, Jorge!

Wonderful sunlight and superbly framed by the silhouetted archway.

I too noticed the ducks in the lower right-hand corner. They add another point of interest. Good, sharp image - Well done and best regards,

Rich

What a wonderful scene. You were so lucky to have been there to see it but you have also demonstrated good craft by commiting the scene to film. This shot has so many things going for it as my eye wanders around the frame. Those ducks in the bottom right of the frame are the icing on the cake for me. Stunning!

PHIL

Thats a truly wonderful scene you have captured, im in awe!
The sun, the contrast, the colours, the reflection, the birds, the shadow and that Beautiful arch from the building!
Thanks for sharing this!

Hi Jorge,
it's a wonderful photo! Nice contrast of the black withthe sunrise'c colors. Beautiful!
Greetings,
Sònia.

Hi Jorge.
Very beautiful. Great composition and contrast. A really uniquely designed photograph. Well done.
Regards, Steve.

Hi Jorge,
Lovely image! I love the silhouetted framing and the colours of the sunrise are beautiful. The ducks add a nice touch to the image! Well done and TFS and welcome to Trekearth.
Cheers Tina :-)

Jorge - This image just says "India" You have capture the essence of the place. Good use of framing with the arch.
Regards Colin

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  • partha Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1487 W: 85 N: 1298] (12964)
  • [2007-04-02 5:34]

Hi Jorge,
Nice frame within a frame composition.The reflection looks brilliant and the swans at the right bottom gives a nice feeling.
Regards.
Partha

Very very nice shot!! Nicely framed, great!! Compliments!!

Hello Jorge,
Thanks for your critique of my "Water Lilies" photo. This is a lovely photo of yours. You composed this photo very well. The architectural curves on the top portion (foreground) help the viewers know that this image is from India. This is a great composition and the ducks on the lower left are the "icing on the cake" for your photo. Great job!
Stan

Hi Jorge
wonderful window! This natural frame is very good, you made a nice composition with perfect shade.
Reflections on the water are simply incredible...well done!

Bruce W.

Hi Jorge, an other wonderful sunside with splendid colors and great light, beautiful architectonic frame, very well done, ciao Silvio

hi jorge...
this is beautiful scene... i like your pov very much... it composed everything well.... frame through the arch also is very nice wtih swans at corner... like a painting in mughal era....
greetings...

This is remarkable Jorge, not just another sunset, the exotic framing and setting are both fabuluous, the 3 ducks add extra appeal.

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  • flory Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 850 W: 23 N: 985] (4561)
  • [2007-04-11 0:18]

ciao Jorge,
you've got here a splendid sunset,framed by the silhouette of the arch,lovely reflections on the water..a magically atmosphere so nice presented!
good day,
flory

Hello Jorge!
A nice and atmospheric view of the water tank in Jaisalmer!! The soft colours are looking very romantic together with the swans in front of the building.
I have been in Jaisalmer twice, in 1995 with much water inside the Gadi Sagar and in 2004 after some years with less rain.

Thank you for sharing,
Daniel

Hello Jorge
WoW!!!!Excellent shot! Wonderful scene! In my opinion your best fhoto from your collection. Well done!
Charles

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  • kri54 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 398 W: 30 N: 23] (1357)
  • [2007-04-22 3:36]

photo présentant bien l'inde traditionnelle

Hi Jorge
This one from Jaisalmer is great shot Excellently framed with arch.lovely golden light,reflection and three ducks make it enchanting photo.TFS
Ramesh

Beautiful, perfect.

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  • atus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2293 W: 206 N: 4467] (14945)
  • [2007-05-12 19:29]

Hello Jorge,
very well captured and greatly framed sunrise shot with the arch. The backlighting is well managed and the colours are warm and nice. The ducks are a nice bonus of the shot. Well done!
Tfs and best regards.
Attila

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  • Yffic Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 898 W: 17 N: 1183] (5826)
  • [2007-05-14 1:33]

Hi Jorge.

A great picture, with beautifuls warm colors.
Composition is also good with this arch on the top.

Regards.

Yves

Olá, Jorge.

Essa imagem é tão bonita que não parece de verdade...
Parece uma ilustração cuidadosamente criada.

Parabéns!
Luciana.

Beautiful sunrise scene. The warm colours are very attractive. The framing is perfect with the sun right in the middle and the arch shadow all around. The three swimming ducks at the bottom right add a special lively touch.
Congratulations Jorge!

Thành.

Hola Jorge, gran puesta de sol con excelente motivo, me gusta mucho el encuadre realizado con un primer plano del arco muy acertado dando profundidad al resto de la imagen.
muy buen trabajo, felicidades amigo
un saludo.

Jorge, this is a magic photo, the framing is perfect, but the 3 swans (or ducks, or rather, 3 geese) are making the whole scene more personal and more special... congratulations !
Cath.

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  • dilane Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 690 W: 143 N: 1162] (9569)
  • [2007-06-18 13:06]

Bonsoir Jorge,
ta photo reflète bien (et c'est le cas de le dire) l'esprit de Jaisalmer - Les trois cygnes sont là comme une signature - beau coucher de soleil -
amitiés -
daniel

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  • Click3 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 321 W: 70 N: 264] (1855)
  • [2007-06-23 20:29]

Hola Jorge...gracias por visitar mi galería que me dio la oprtunidad de conocer y por sobre todo disfrutar tú maravillosa e interesante galería...como tengo una gran debilidad por las puestas de sol y contraluces no pude dejar de comentar esta "obra de arte" tuya...el marco de referencia...los colores...las siluetas...incluyendo esos patos...qué gran composición/belleza...felicitaciones !
Saludos,
Robert

Dear Jorge,
What a wonderful image!
Really great frame with a lot of lovely details.
Excellent work, Cristian

Hi Jorge,
I go back to your very first posting. This is a very well composed scene. The framing and lighting balance is just perfect. The reflections is an added bonus to create extra dimension to the compo. Excellent work! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

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  • Piebe (167)
  • [2007-07-26 10:23]

A very nice picture Jorge, wonderful colors of the sunrise the swans make the picture even better looking.
Regards, Piebe

Wow, Jorge. That is almost too much! So many romantic and exotic shapes and silhouettes. Nicely composed shot which works with the centred sun.

Hi Jorge,

wonderful scene, seems to see a painting. The arch frames perfectly this great view, colors and reflection are great and the swans give the decisive perfection!

Well done!

Gio

Hello Jorge,
Très beau cadrage avec cette arche dentelée, j'aime beaucoup cette image qui inspire paix et sérénité, les silhouettes des trois canards à droite sont la cerise sur le gâteau. C'est très beau..
Amitiés
Christian

Hello Jorge,
Superb image, the long depth of field works really well here.
The composition and point of view is great and very good frame by the archway. Lovely colors and tones,beautiful scenery.
Regards.
Stella

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  • utkue Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 694 W: 12 N: 498] (3420)
  • [2007-08-12 5:21]

Hello Jorge,
Very beautiful shot.
Sunriselight, colours, cadrage and reflection are wonderfull in this photograph.
Congratulations.
Best regards from Ankara.

I like the framing... plus the dramatic color v

Hi Jorge
This picture is amazing with a perfect frame for the sun. The shades are elegants
Excellent
Bertrand

Hi Jorge,
Wonderful sunrise compossition. Very good colors, contrast and nice reflections.
Nice work,
Ahmet

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  • vincz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2997 W: 85 N: 5051] (17520)
  • [2007-08-26 2:05]

Beautiful image, very peaceful. The composition is excellent with the architectural framing , the swans, ... Very nice.

Hi!
Great picture with those wonderfull silhouettes.I like the depth and the reflections very much.
The three ducks on the lower right are a fantastic detail!
Tfs,Jonas

Nice & smooth picture !

The three animals at the bottom right give a little movement to the picture

Well done

I recognized the place instantly, in your thumbnail, and it brings back marvelous memories of sunsets spent daily in possibly the quietest place in the whole city.

Hello Jorge,
A wonderful sunrise picture...
The archway really a nice focal point, every details are very nice on this picture, even the small ducks silhouttes make it more impressive. tfs

daniel

Hello Jorge,
I like your balanced composition!
From the exposure data and the use of ND8, I can imagine the strong direct light that would have come into the sensor. The result is so lovely!
Compliments,
Athanasios.

I'm without words!! Great!!!

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  • siolaw Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4003 W: 403 N: 6693] (22751)
  • [2007-11-04 3:56]

Hi Jorge,
A nice sunrise view naturally framed with a nice arch, lovely little gazebo in the lake with bonus rhree ducks cruising in the corner... superb reflections too.. Well seen
Laurent

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  • jcsas Silver Star Critiquer [C: 45 W: 0 N: 1] (25)
  • [2007-11-05 6:12]

Nice photo and beautiful colours !!!
Regards JAMES.C

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  • crckt Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1402 W: 68 N: 1315] (6815)
  • [2007-12-02 11:19]

Hi Jorge,
This shot is really mindblowing! What a beautiful frame with the silhouettes of the structure, the water, the ducks...EXCELLENT!
Regards,
Shaeri

Hi Jorge,
very beatiful photo!!
CiaoCiao, Vivi

Hi Jorge,

Amazing framing, very well selected with beautiful colours. TFS

Fara

Beautiful lake picture! I walked all around with a very nice Indian man Hari. It was almost completely dried up then. Wild dogs attacked a wild pig and he threw huge rocks at them. Lucky they did not attack us. He said if they did, and killed us, we would be famous, wouldn't my children be proud. Pilgrims would come to the site. Indian logic is a world apart from ours. I put the story on "Bridgets Jones quilt" online. someone found it, gave it to him. then I accidently met him 8 years later in Bikaner.

Hi

this is good picture

regards
Hanif khattak
Pakistan

Hi bruno beatifull sunset
great reflection and very good warm colours I really like it
Toba

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