Photographer’s Note
Another photo i took while motorbiking through north vietnam
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sengir
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 366 W: 51 N: 490]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif){kind=small}
(4946) 2004-05-22 10:42
very nice portrait, maybe you could have put him a little bit to the right?
Skorj
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 399 W: 12 N: 1]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-n.gif){kind=small}
(581) 2004-05-22 11:09
Nice soft portrait with feeling. It would hold a lot more power if it was less central and did not have such a ghastly frame.
greg
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 650 W: 313 N: 97]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-n.gif){kind=small}
(2835) 2004-07-30 7:16
I agree with Skorj - tried a workshop with his suggestions
Porteplume
(3257) 2004-07-31 2:09
It's a very nice shot but I agree with Antoni, Mark & Greg. Too much centered and - as you said - terrible frame! :o)
But the expression you caught is wonderful, it's a nice observation and Greg made a fantastic crop on his WS...
Photo Information
- Copyright: stefan kendrew (stef24) (74)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Black & White
- Date Taken: 2004-03-00
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: Canon G5
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2004-05-22 10:39
Viewed: 2789
Points: 3
Discussions
- To greg: workshop (2)
by stef24, last updated 07-30 07:58 - To Skorj: yeah the frame is terrible (1)
by stef24, last updated 05-22 13:31
