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Vertabrae *RP*


Vertabrae *RP*
Photo Information
Copyright: Bettina Marie Higginson (BettinaMarie) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 148 W: 0 N: 190] (664)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-03-26
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon 350D (Digital Rebel XT)
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/100 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-03-14 20:25
Viewed: 654
Points: 30
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I have taken all of the critiques and comments in and have made the decision to repost this photo. Reposting this photo and receiving your comments is how I will learn....

Petere Iredale Shipwreck.....

Post Processing:
Leveling the horizon
Using unsharpening
a bit more adjustment on brightening and contrast
framing

Please if you have seen this particular photo before let me know how you feel about it now..

Take care,
Bettina Marie =0)

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Wow! Bettina,

Lovely picture. I read your note and i went to see the old one. What an amazing change. I like the black and white and the frame. It looks much better like this. Good work.

Martin

hi Bettina,difficult to say how to make it better,it is a nice shot.maybe some more contrast will be welcome?IT seems a bit dark.anyway a nice black and white,which a hard exercice.:)

Gorgeous bw Bettina. I haven't seen your previous post but this one certainly is a show stopper. A very nice bw with a sense of emptiness, desolation, and full of extraordinary tones. A real work of art.
Take care,
sasa

i liked this in particular for its outstanding composition and the tone selected. B/w goes with the image. thanks for sharing.

Hi Bettina! This is a great shot! The contrast looks perfect to me - good light.
Highly interesting subject, and good perspective/angle.
Cheers,

*** Ursula ***

Hello Bettina,

This picture is very nice, you are doing a great work with your camera. Thanks for shearing.

Regards, Frank

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  • amino Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 121 W: 13 N: 77] (374)
  • [2007-03-15 1:48]

Beautiful and Surreallllll! Just like a Dali painting. The B&W suits the ambiguous mood.

Very nice

Hello Bettina,
A nice BW image, I like the diagonal made by the fence.
Much better than the original: contrast is better and tones also.
Good work
didier

Hi Bettina. I like this one. You have composed this photo beautifully and the B&W treatment is perfect for creating that timeless feeling. You have handled the light well also, the black bits are truly black and the sky has texture. Nice work and thanks for sharing.
Cheers, Paul.

Nice job Bettina. I really like the B/W format here. Nice use of light too.

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  • yazdi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 68 W: 0 N: 55] (409)
  • [2007-03-18 17:14]

Hi Bettina;
You Know, you are a very good compositor as you show oss in this photo of you, I like the all of vertical lines ended in the horisental with diagonal wich makes this photo very special and I just seat and look at it as my eyes moving from foreground to vanishing point.
And now I know that two parallel line meet each other in the horison.
Great job dear Bettina.
TAKE CARE!
Regards!
Jamal

Dear Bettina

First, when i saw this "RP" it seems to dark for me. But when i came back on the original vertebrae, i could find all the work you did on this shot. B and W is not easy ( i think i can do it well) but you found here the way from the dark to the light in a beautiful photo at all.
Your friend.
Pascal

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  • colinb Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 275 W: 9 N: 110] (1258)
  • [2007-03-20 21:04]

Really nice composition. The eye is led through this scene so nicely. Great job.

Nice photo. This was dramatically captured. :) I like it black and white. I like the photo leads the viewer to the sky. I love the details in the sky. Thanks for sharing. :)

Hello Bettina

Vertabrae... I like the title and not least the photo.
The composition here is great, the attention is put straight on the "backbone" bone here. The B&W conversion also works wonders in this photo, too many times have the ambient colours ruined a photo of mine, and I guess it is what would have happened here as well.
Great job.

Odd Jarle

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