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Fine morning in Downtown


Fine morning in Downtown
Photo Information
Copyright: Shailendra Shinde (s10001in) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 657 W: 81 N: 161] (1454)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-02-11
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-02-11 10:21
Viewed: 917
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 24
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Fine sunny morning in Tokyo Downtown.
People enjoying the early spring.
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Bonsoir
excellentes couleurs et très bon cadrage de cette scène.j'aime beaucoup le relief de la photo. Beau travail
Xavier

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  • ryno Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 730 W: 0 N: 192] (3442)
  • [2007-02-11 10:43]

Hi Shailendra, this is a good capture of the hustle and bustle of city life. A vivid and vibrant photo with the fashionably-dressed girl serving as a focus point and interesting background detail. A very pleasing composition, well done! Regards,
Ryno

Hi Shailendra: The point that I like of this photo is this arm coming in from the right side of the frame, it gives more suspense to the photo: Is he going to catch her? Want to bring her attetion toward the staff on the shop?... It allows the photo to continue far beyond the frame and that´s great. Take care.

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  • vedra Gold Star Critiquer [C: 567 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2007-02-11 11:55]

Hi Shailendra,
Nice daily life scene with bright colours. Thanks to the unusual angle of shooting, you achieved the sense of movement here.
Interesting expression on the face of the woman which appears completely unaware of you shooting in the front of her, but perhaps she is in her own shopping dreams :)
Vedrana

Bonjour Shailendra,
A great POV, I like this tilt.
Colors are oversaturated, ti works well with this subject, and with your WB.
A nice one,
JB.

Hi Shailendra
Very interesting POV , colors is looks good, and focus perfect
Goos daily life scene of Tokyo
TFS\Regards

Hello Shailendra,
I like this marketphoto. Can´t exactly say why. Maybe it´s the tilt, the sharp light and colors or the action or the close up portrait of this girl passing by but looking away from the camera. Or just the combination of it all. Well done anyway. I´ll add it to my favorites.
Harko

Good one....loads of color,far better than your India pictures.The hand in the left is a must. I just wonder how you got good colors but the details of the face is not there.

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  • jinju Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3167 W: 96 N: 1601] (14241)
  • [2007-02-13 0:05]

Ots a good shot, almost Frurachanesque, but one thing that bothering me is tyat her face is blown out. The skin has no tones, its almost like a mask. A shame because I think you have several good things coming together in this shot Shail.

It'S a very nice shot, Shail, colors a little bit STRONG, as is the contrast (on her face), but you nailed it, timing, dominating presence of this strong woman in the frame, slight tilt, a by^product of the "hip", movement, shadows. This is very good indeed (how could I say otherwise?)
-F

Hi Shailendra.

This POV creates a lovely dynamism. Well seen.

Only take care with the overexposition.

Rgs, Oscar

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  • ninaL Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1766 W: 222 N: 1845] (15305)
  • [2007-09-10 7:01]

Yes.
There is something wich talk me.
Despite of breaking rules or thanks to them ;). This tilt, this disorder...Here, all this makes me something...a kind of emotion. Why ? This girl is in the center, and the light is her just for her...and all word around seems exist just for her...this hand on the left seems be for her, too.
I like it.
Regards. Grazyna.

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