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![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 205 W: 0 N: 70]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-n-g.gif)
(2145) - [2007-02-05 15:06]
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Strange nobody is reacting on this great photo......beautiful sharpness an natural colours and last but not least a stunning face!I give you 100 points for this shot Guy.
Jan.
Hi Guy,
There is is problem here, which I would describe as balance: I'm assuming you tried to capture as much of the crown while still getting as close as possible, which I feel as gone wrong. The top half is empty -- the cutt off crown doesn't count -- while her face is completely in the lower half and her look forward and down has nowhere to go.
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 87 W: 36 N: 40]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif){kind=small}
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