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danielswalsh
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(13324) 2007-01-12 1:13
Hi Melissa;
Not a bad shot, but I do have some suggestions for you.
Click this link for an easy Horizon fix that I use. A crooked horizon in this type of shot is quite noticeable, and this method will ensure perfect horizons everytime!
My other suggestion for this image would be a cropping off about 3 fingers width off the bottom and about 2 fingers width off the left hand side. Removing some 'dead' space from the image will bring more impact and appeal.
I hope these suggestions help.
Have a good weekend!
- Dan
Luci
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(372) 2007-01-12 1:57
Hi Melissa,
you have been in the right time at the right place.Very beautifully coloured sky and water.
Cheers,
Lucia
ThompsonFung
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(54) 2007-01-12 2:33
Hi melissa,
I was indeed very glad to see this photo, the colour beside the island is spectacular, very eye-catching.
Cheers,
Thompson
eshirey
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(325) 2007-01-12 4:13
Brilliant colors! Really lovely.
I see Dan's point a/b cropping, but I like this way too...I like seeing the range of color here, and the effect of an explosion of light and color in the upper right.
Nice work!
