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HIRAKZ (168) 2006-11-10 9:31

Hi Ravid,

First the composition. Extraordinary. I like it and am sure many in TE will positively appreciate the PoV. The color, th stark white sky in the middle and blue, the mountainous horizon, everything seems so perfect.

But the moment the perfection ends, the grains catches the eyes of the viewer and the blur too makes its presence felt. The sharpness is amiss which should positively accompany such creative photographs.

Nevertheless, an enjoyable photograph.
TFS
Hirak

fc22 (746) 2006-11-10 9:44

Hi Ravid - a wonderful captured moment and composition. I felt that a B&W could be interesting so I made a Workshop, hope you will like it.

Best, Florin

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ksoloduc (324) 2006-11-10 11:30

the composition and the point of view are great!
the backlight is hard to deal with, but i believe this could've been done better - without the blur and stuff. i give it a green smiley face though. good luck shooting more picts

SamB (1948) 2006-11-10 23:50

Nice work, the idea and POV are very strong, but i think that the softness really hurts it. Also, i probably would have preferred the exposure to be stopped down a bit to go for a pure silhoutte, but this may just be personal preference.

Thanks!
sam

golsa (163) 2006-11-11 8:42