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Photographer’s Note

Another 'elemental' image, taken on the same morning as the previous one. i like the combination of primary colours, the combination of inanimate and animate entities, and a sort of scale from life to non-life: the man walking, the seagull, the grass, the roof & the bench (man-made) and, finally, the sky. Enough :)
Please tell me what you think.

pboehringer, Anna--, isabela_sor, Silvio1953, lilimih33 has marked this note useful

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grigand (12624) 2006-10-24 16:06

Ciao Mario,
Complimenti, bella questa composizione con oggetti statici contrapposti all'azione.
Ciao
Andrea

pboehringer (770) 2006-10-24 16:24

Quite interesting and surprising composition of those simple elements such a walking person, a bench, a grass strip, a seagull and a roof. So far so good, it sounds ordinary, but your composition is far from being ordinary. Everything seems to have a natural place, but it doesn't look natural. Good eye to catch it!
Best Regards, Peter

vinicio (22412) 2006-10-24 17:47

Perfetta, Mario, la sola cosa di cui posso parlare criticando negativamente, è la mancanza del viso dell'uomo rivolto verso lo spettatore, cioé me, è l'unica cosa che spegne la foto, per il resto è ben composta e molto bella, il mio workshop sarebbe di eliminare il "nonnetto" dalla foto, ma è tardi e domani viene presto.
Ciao
Vinicio

deblink (2548) 2006-10-24 17:53

Hi Mario,
I like the image because it is different. The sky is a very unusual colour. The fact that the mans face is turned away adds more interest to the photo. Different. Thank you for sharing.
Cheers,
Debbie

berseph (1758) 2006-10-24 22:07

I like this one. The combination of colors is very pleasing, and the patterns interesting. I wonder what the man is looking at.

John_F_Kennedy (31427) 2006-10-25 3:56

Well composed shot. Very good details and exposure of this difficult red subject. I like the perspective with the old man and the bench.
Achim

zenskat (656) 2006-10-25 9:41

I really like it Mario, very bold graphic shot with everyday elements made to look interesting. Maybe a blur on the sky wouldn't hurt, and i wonder how it would work in b&w?
Jez

Anna-- (7739) 2006-10-25 16:04

Ciao Mario,
per me sì: è abbastanza! (non so in realtà se era una domanda...)
Mi piace la composizione per gli stessi motivi da te menzionati nella nota, e anche per la bella linearità e pulizia (non ci sono elementi che disturbano) della foto.
La luce è ottima.
Anna

isabela_sor (42162) 2006-10-25 17:49

It's an interesting scene and composition... the man in the first plan of the photo,in a corner, the seagul in the other corner.... Colors are unusual nd strong and you manage well the light. Well done,Mario
Regards

Angshu (33645) 2006-10-25 23:37

Hello Mario
I love the interaction of elements in your shots & the elements are few but fascinating....you've mentioned them all in your note. The simplicity in the shot yet again appeals to me the most & all the elements seem to be in the place they should be...or at least your photograph makes us feel that way. That’s the success of this shot! Well seen & well composed!
Regards
Angshu

Silvio1953 (41761) 2006-10-26 15:48

Ciao Mario, bella ed originale composizione, foto lineare con ottima luce, a me piace anche il "nonnetto" con la faccia girata, appena puoi rimandami l'e-mail che non ho ricevuto sarò ben lieto di risponderti, ciao Silvio

rossofuoco (6352) 2006-10-27 17:39

Ciao Mario.
Bella!!! ottimi colori e bella composizione.
Renzo

lilimih33 (9874) 2006-11-09 7:13

Hello Mario! Nice composition and beautiful colours! Great perspective! Well done! Lili

branley (3681) 2006-12-05 9:47

Hi Mario,

a very simple yet bold composition with such good contrasting colours. For me though, it's the seagull that gets my vote! A fine image.

Regards

Stephen

cessy (13647) 2007-03-14 11:37

different shapes, different colors, all nicely composed in the frame
very well done