kids on the bench Photo

Photographer’s Note

Dear all,
I'm new and learning
so please comment/critic

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bfly (5737) 2004-04-07 14:45

hello sadi, wellcome to TE..
I will only write about the content..
my ideas are : kids are really lovely but they look like they were made to sit down and remote from the subject...I am a little disturbed by their seriousness..
and your higher position was maybe stressing them too..it is very good to be on eye level with kids...

and..please try to wrtie a note..notes make pictures more understandible

spence (1554) 2004-04-09 6:34

Very sweet and serious children Sani and a nice sharp photograph of them. I think it would be good to focus more closely on them by cropping away most of the background. Well done and welcome to TE.