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worldcitizen
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(2229) 2006-07-23 17:31
Hello Afshin,
I like your POV and composition. You seem to be looking up as the girl approaches, and she looks good on the left side of the photo, with the buildings and path to her right.
ribeiroantonio
(21773) 2006-07-23 19:51
Your POV is really good. The compo, light and colours are excellent. Very well done.
Antonio
s10001in
(1485) 2006-07-23 20:32
Hi.
This is really nice one & sharp but should have more bigger.
Regards,
Shailendra
Davoud
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(231) 2006-07-24 2:49
[Persian language / English characters]
salam
salebe , amma jaleb tar az khode aks baraye man mogheeiyate akkase
zaviyeye did kheyli zibast
sepas
Davoud
asanak
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(1972) 2006-07-24 5:58
Dear Afshin ,
Another great shot in excellent light conditions.
I love all your shots!
Sharp and well balanced.
Tfs,Regards
asana
ninadev
(5225) 2006-07-24 12:43
A very simple subject and composition but it works so well because IMO of the green jacket the girl is wearing, the same color as the trees in the background. I like the contrast between the traditional scarf on her head and the more modern socks and shoes whe is wearing.
h_sedghi
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(876) 2006-07-24 14:17 [Comment]
saamb
(1004) 2006-07-25 14:57
Afshin,
ohh, very nice colors and frame. i like her figure and look. this is a good image of persian girls as a sample. greetinf
SAAM
Jacobp
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(798) 2006-07-26 4:36
salam afshin
akse ghashangiyeh.tamome chizhaash khobeh vali be nazare man ye kami taareh.
damet garm jacobp
farshid
(365) 2006-07-28 6:43
salam afshin
wow ,nice composition.
i like the lighting.
sharpnesesham toppe
merc az inke aksaye "Persian girl" mizari,bazam bezar
felan
asadi-s
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(108) 2006-10-17 21:35
good colors but I think if you wanted to focus on the girl you should have unfocused the background
Photo Information
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Copyright: Afshin Memarian (pix)
![Silver Star Critiquer [C: 10 W: 0 N: 0]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-n.gif)
(204) - Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2006-07-15
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: Nikon Coolpix 4500
- Exposure: f/7.3
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2006-07-23 17:26
