Sisters at the window Photo

Photographer’s Note

The picture was taken in Udaipur in a very narrow street beside one of the bridges.

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mdchachi (1611) 2006-04-24 13:29

You captured a really great expression and pose with these girls. Really nice shot.

kvananthnaag (376) 2006-04-24 13:49

2 beauties..great smiles..good colors..cheers mate!!

sayan (2609) 2006-04-24 14:21

Hi Jorge,
Nice composition. Perfect framing, great DOF, nice expressive eyes, beautiful smiles, good colours, very sharp. A great double portrait indeed!
Regards,
Sayan

sencer (240) 2006-04-24 15:32

Hi Jorge,
Very successful portrait photo but I wish it would be a bit darker, because there is a bit much light in the view. Maybe it would better if you wouldn't cut the hand of girl. Anyway, you captured smiling expression with great success. TFS...

SMD

nopoint (878) 2006-04-24 16:49

Great capture of expression! Nice work...Kiet

fotobram (386) 2006-04-24 17:32

Very colourfull duo portrait.
I agree with previous critique. Looks a bit too bright. A bit darker will yield more saturation as well. 2:-) for the compo (although the elbow ....)

BdM

rushfan2112 (2965) 2006-04-24 17:48

Jorge, a gem slightly missed. The heads are too central to the frame. Slightly higher would have allowed you to capture the arm. Also, it is not pin-sharp and it is slightly over-exposed. A tighter crop might work and, if you play with it in Photoshop, please re-post as it's a beautiful capture of two very attractive girls. Paul.

partha (13677) 2006-04-25 14:17

This is a cheerful photograph full of life.
Nice composition and u timed it well.
Dear Jorge,
where r u actually works/stays with tribes at Orissa?

vijay76 (18) 2006-04-25 22:36

True emotions are hard to get when you point your camera at someone. Lovey picture and amazing subjects. Well done.

rosaline (0) 2006-04-26 13:30

Hi Jorge
This is a great shot which captures the smiles in a natural way. I like the definition and warm tones of the shot. Good composiion and nice focus on the eyes. Well done.

pranab (5354) 2006-04-27 2:27

jorge,
you should be named the photographer who captures indian faces. once again wondeful expressive capture with good color an ddetail. nice idea of framing with the window.