Photographer’s Note
A beautiful Christmas day by the beach. I took this while standing in the ocean at hollywood beach as my husband swam by looking for aquatic life.
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abhishek
(288) 2006-04-14 18:09
Hi Claudia,
Well the idea was good but I wud have liked to see both the hands in the frame... to get a good idea of the motion!
TFS
Abhishek
silycat
(607) 2006-04-14 20:19
I like your picture very much, nice moment to take the photo and nice light effects, maybe you could try a little "make up" in photoshop or something to make the details sharper and better focused, and colors less gray...But the idea is original!
david
(3972) 2006-04-14 22:35
this shot would have been perfect in vertical framing. your subject would have filled the shot nicely and we'd have seen more of his arms and body.
in post processing, try to clean up the shot a bit.
also, if your camera is able to use filters, a polariser would cut away most of this glare and leave you with an amazing photo!
Photo Information
- Copyright: Claudia Deme (claudia15) (19)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2005-12-25
- Categories: Daily Life
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2006-04-14 17:05








