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In the Evening


In the Evening
Photo Information
Copyright: Agus Munoraharjo (Agus) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 34 W: 0 N: 7] (85)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 1987
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-02-06 1:50
Viewed: 1180
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Two Bayanese old women sitted down in a kind of 'lesung', i.e. a tool to stuck some rices. Some grandchildren also sitted down in their sides.
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To Tomernayer: Thanks, how R U?Agus 1 07-21 08:11
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I love your composition Agus, this is a lovely scene! About the colors and sharpness i donīt know, it looks very processed with some unnatural colors and light levels...maybe the scanning work (?) was not so good...anyway the theme is very interesting and thatīs why i like it :)

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  • manny Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2980 W: 89 N: 4012] (21348)
  • [2004-02-10 20:36]

I must say, Agus, that this picture is the kind that would appear in textbooks about rural life in Indonesia. Very good composition (wide angle is effective). The colors and clarity are a bit flawed but it does create a rustic appela. Good picture.

Maybe you can post the original for workshop?

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  • ebban Silver Star Critiquer [C: 10 W: 6 N: 1] (180)
  • [2004-03-30 4:14]

It is not sharp and it is something strange with the colours. I don't know if you done that on purpose but I think it is these tings that makes this photo a little bit extra. I like it.

i like the sitting kids, the green house, well everything, i found this picture and your style vey unique and intersting

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  • nea (69)
  • [2004-10-05 8:39]

Great picture,I like the colors very much

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