In the Evening Photo

Photographer’s Note

Two Bayanese old women sitted down in a kind of 'lesung', i.e. a tool to stuck some rices. Some grandchildren also sitted down in their sides.

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Eagle78 (1925) 2004-02-10 14:43

I love your composition Agus, this is a lovely scene! About the colors and sharpness i don´t know, it looks very processed with some unnatural colors and light levels...maybe the scanning work (?) was not so good...anyway the theme is very interesting and that´s why i like it :)

manny (21378) 2004-02-10 20:36

I must say, Agus, that this picture is the kind that would appear in textbooks about rural life in Indonesia. Very good composition (wide angle is effective). The colors and clarity are a bit flawed but it does create a rustic appela. Good picture.

Maybe you can post the original for workshop?

ebban (180) 2004-03-30 4:14

It is not sharp and it is something strange with the colours. I don't know if you done that on purpose but I think it is these tings that makes this photo a little bit extra. I like it.

Tomernayer (512) 2004-04-21 8:46