The basket is heavy!

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• simsim (154)
• [2006-03-29 9:37]

Hi Masume,
I love your picture, the way you take it is really well done. The effect in black and white give a great atmosphere. It's a really daily life shot.
regards
Simon

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• Amirsun (2084)
• [2006-03-30 10:12]

Very nice shot, Masume!
Well seen and well composed. I like it a bit darker to make silhouette of these children.
Tanks for posting.
Regards, Amir

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• fireflyz (2079)
• [2006-03-30 12:43]
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Salaam Masume,
Welcome to TE! You have started your journey here with three lovely posts. What I see common in all of them is your low shots which give us the same perspective as the subjects. That's great! I think the two girls carying the basket are a little too centered. however, still a nice photo with good choice of B&W.
I'm looking forward to see more of your photos!

regards,
Skye

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• h_sedghi (868)
• [2006-04-02 14:56]
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• ercool200 (235)
• [2006-04-04 14:38]

more contrast

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• teacozie (1363)
• [2006-04-05 6:05]

Yo Masume!

Great composition and good work for making an effort to be in the right position for the POV. I agree perhaps a little more contrast and levels but in a whole it's a very well spotted and captured photo.

Cheers.

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• saamb (991)
• [2006-04-07 13:40]

Masume,
this is a lovely shot of two poor girl. nice image of their life. also you capture good moment of best angle. good frame.
SAAM

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• tjanze (5668)
• [2006-06-16 14:07]

Hi Masume!
Good photo of simple peoples life.You show very well,how kids take too big heavy basket.I remeber my young days.Good choice B&W.It makes photo more dramatic. Have a nice weekend.