Photographer’s Note
On St. Pete beach in Florida. I saw this bird watching this bird... (I TOLD you I was dreaming of women in bikinis http://www.trekearth.com/gallery/photo324075.htm).
PP. Crop and contrast adjustment.
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Olrik
(1537) 2006-06-20 15:51
Hi Basil,
A very funny one, and a good title (even if only "a bird" could have been sufficient). The POV, at the level of the bird is excellent. And you had the chance that the silhouette was attractive... in fact sexy.
But perhaps there's too more sky and too more sand on the left. The other people are also a bit disturbing (what's this big guy with this yellow short ?). Here's a WS to give you an idea of what I imagined. I hope you'll like it.
Have a nice day,
Olivier.
kittyhawk
(1687) 2006-06-20 16:41
Hello Mike,
Nice photo, I like the composition and light in the image. I think the image is a bit "un tidy" and so I must admit that the WS does the photo a bit of good. Nice work capturing this. TFS.
- Halgeir
Photo Information
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Copyright: Mike Basil (mbasil)
(2117) - Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2006-02-22
- Categories: Daily Life, Humorous
- Camera: Olympus Stylus Verve
- Exposure: f/14.0, 1/160 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Final Version, Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2006-02-25 11:57








