Photographer’s Note
One day I went out on the roof of my place to capture the sunset. It often gets quite colorful...
Although this photo has potential to become great, I can't quite put my finger on what should change... can someone help me out?
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darsic
(139) 2006-01-22 5:59
Hello! the colors are indeed wonderful! But I find that the sun is a bit dazzling. Maybe it's what bothers you?
Dany
Buin
(38258) 2006-01-22 15:13
Hallo Johann!
I must disappoint you. There is nothing to change! Your photo shows a wonderful sunset in astonishing colours and a good sharpness. In my opinion it IS a great picture!
Greetings!
Frank
plimrn
(19710) 2006-02-04 15:58
Wonderful colors. I think what this photo needs is a bit of cropping to emphasize the silhouette of the trees against the lake.
I did a workshop and liked the results. Uh oh, I posted a wrong version and then deleted it but I see that it counts as two workshps.
You can try it yourself, I cropped the picure from 11 x 8 down to 9x5 and I took the area all from the left and the bottom.
If you try it, let me know what you think>
Photo Information
- Copyright: Johann Gunnarsson (joi_franski) (43)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2005-05-15
- Categories: Nature
- Camera: Kodak DX7590
- Exposure: f/2.8, 1/200 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2006-01-22 5:39








