Partizanske Vode Photo

Photographer’s Note

Picture taken when I was visiting Serbian biker weekend in Zlatibor ( near Užice ).

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david (3972) 2006-01-19 8:49

hi rok! welcome to trek earth!

i see one obvious problem with this shot. you've got 3 interesting subjects that you've tried to combine. they'd never work together!

subject 1: derelict car. this is a fantastic subject for close up photography, lending itself to sepia or black and white shots.

subject 2: the beautiful hills, and in particular, the cluster of sheep! the sheep make for nice repetition if you can get in close. the hills are nice too.

subject 3: nice bike. unlimited things you can do with a bike and a camera.

so, i think that you've got a lot of potentially great matter for photography, but combining them in this way doesn't work.

nice to see you contributing. keep shooting!!

Ebbe (9571) 2006-01-19 14:55

Truly a funny picture. You used the contrast between the two vehicles well and enhanced it in the way you positioned them. Just the fact that one is white and one is black makes a lot for the picture.

BaxeeHUN (52) 2006-01-31 5:56

Hi! Dont care about what davidsmeaton says!!!
This composition is simply GREAT!
Ride this way!:)
Peace