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Copyright: ishai gonda (ishai) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 701 W: 118 N: 309] (4066)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-09-14
Categories: Daily Life, Artwork
Camera: Canon Eos Rebel 300 D, Canon EF 70-200mm f/2.8L IS USM
Exposure: f/3.2, 30 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Flexible steel, abstract, evvka's favorite from TE#2, Graphics / Graphisme 1 [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-09-21 7:05
Viewed: 1231
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 72
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A water sculpture at the center of the city of Thun
Just a close up

Hope you like Abstract


Ishai
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Hi ishai.

Impresive close up in a very original POV.

Regards.

Superrrrr..I liked it very much
Serdar

Hi Ishai,
I love graphical shots and this one it's not an exception. I just love the flow of the lines. Great DOF. Well done
Regards, António

very nice abstract indeed. good choice of black and white.
thanx for sharing
greet Reinder

This photo is bit different..i like it....

good work sir....well done

thanks

santhosh

Nice capture of curves. the strange thing about it is after looking at the curves everything else looks tilted!

Hi Ishai!
Really nice POV and focus!
Very good work!

Umberto

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  • Paolo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4701 W: 146 N: 9014] (39619)
  • [2005-09-21 7:40]

Hi Ishai, what a wonderful image...with all that curves and shadows!
excellent composition, great POV and focus.
thanks, ciao

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  • jinju Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3167 W: 96 N: 1601] (14241)
  • [2005-09-21 8:07]

Hi ishai,

I love it. The abstract is amazing. I love how you cjose this DOF to present this piece of art. Great choice of that and b/w. Awesome.

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  • seanf Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 52 W: 12 N: 32] (246)
  • [2005-09-21 9:01]

hi ishai
this is a wonderful abstract image. it's well composed and well lit. great shot!
sean

Good shot, Ishai! I love abstract and enjoy your composition a lot, excellent pov and lights.
Sarolta

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  • AmiBe Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2067 W: 370 N: 1680] (19492)
  • [2005-09-21 10:38]

Hi Ishai,
good idea, very graphical shot.
I like the curves and the short DOF.
I would like to see the result if the focus was on the second curve.
Anyway I like it

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  • fkk Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 573 W: 0 N: 78] (1822)
  • [2005-09-21 11:05]

Hi ishai;
wonder shot, very nice composition.
harika bir manzara gercekten tebrik ediyorum bu fotografi cok begendim....
good job.

fkk

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  • falves Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 236 W: 11 N: 358] (1399)
  • [2005-09-21 11:34]

Hi Ishai,
Yes I like it!
Great POV and paralelism between the lines. The DOF was well chosen.
Simple but extremelly effective.
Great Job
Fred

Hi Ishai,
great graphic shot.
I like all these lines and their way.
Very nice,
Nino

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  • partha Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1488 W: 85 N: 1293] (12832)
  • [2005-09-21 14:10]

U have really a very good eye. The pic gives a tremendous impression in mind.

Hi Ishai, in graphical mood I see. This is really well seen and captured! The DoF is exquisite and the repetition of swerves/curves is almost hypnotizing. Xcellent graphical capture!
Best regards from Rotterdam,
Bert

Hi Ishai
Superbe image, trčs joli graphisme et bon jeu de PdC.
@+ Toni

wow. Beautiful use of DOF and patterns. The lighting and composition are great. Excellent job! JP

Pure Bridget Riley!

excellent - I need to rest my eyes now!

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  • dolin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2627 W: 447 N: 1494] (15647)
  • [2005-09-22 7:06]

Hi Isahi.
Good eye for this very graphic shot.
I like the line of focus and the 2 blur's parts.
Excellent game of lines and curves.
Really good effect.
Fred

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  • coco Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4122 W: 144 N: 4852] (22971)
  • [2005-09-22 9:50]

Hi Ishai.
Wonderful composition. Technically is really good, and you has great an amazing and suggerent picture. Also good POV.
Regards.

Hello Ishai,

Lovely picture i would have that on my wall.
I like how you played with the sharpness.
Nice composition.

TFS
Greetings
Re[]v[]co

One fo the best graphism i ever seen in TE. Bravo. Regards

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  • pitai Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1193 W: 162 N: 936] (3925)
  • [2005-09-23 8:51]

I have no idea of the scale, but the compo is great. I like the sharpness of the center and the blur of the edges. The B&W factor, gives more interest to the shapes of the sculpture. Very nice!!

Gabriel

Hi Ishai,
I like this close up - it's very graphical; the b/w conversion is also good as is the DOF.
May just say one thing in order to improve this already excellent shot? I think rotating the whole image about 1.5 or 2 degrees anti-clockwise would make it even more geometrically pleasant for viewing...

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  • flip89 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 603 W: 174 N: 597] (3419)
  • [2005-09-26 11:45]

The easy undulation of the lines is like listening to light jazz on a lazy afternoon. Wonderful!

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  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 839 W: 70 N: 984] (4839)
  • [2005-09-27 0:17]

Yes! I like the ythmn and graphical form it makes on the photo. It is very eye catching and you have a good DofF.

Also, thank you for your comments on my photo,"Sundial Bridge". I appreciate it.

I enjoy both your picture and your tittle.
It's simple but it is big picture for me to learn.

Thanks.

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  • Bien Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 502 W: 50 N: 947] (4685)
  • [2005-09-29 12:22]

Hoi Ishai, Ithink you achieved an excellent result with this abstract image. I like the repetitiveness which gives the image certain calmness. The movement works energising and motivates one to move on. It could almost be seen as a learning curve. This works very inspiring - even almost hypnotising. Very well done! Sabine

hi Ishai,
well here you really achived nice effect; I like very much abstract compositions found just in front of our eyes... and this one is praticulary interesting, cause it's abstract and in this abstraction there's a play of lines... lines that repeats the move and follow each other... in cirtail cirles of art historians some whole call it TRANSLATION...
well done...
ciao
ana

woaw! i love that kind of picture! very grahic and good DOF. thanks for sharing those kind of piece of art!

Hi ishai,
Your work is great and beautiful! I love this one in particular!
Fred

Hi Ishai.
I like abstraction, you're very good in this kind of photos. Great deep of field.
Regards, B.

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  • bimo (639)
  • [2005-12-07 3:22]

Hi ishai ..
Great great pattern ..
i love it

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  • maki Gold Star Critiquer [C: 800 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-04-13 3:40]

Hi Ishai,
Great paralel curved lines. I like such geometric works. Good sharpness in the center and good choice of the B&W tones. regards. maki

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