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Copyright: Mireille Stegmuller (Mireille) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 239 W: 74 N: 56] (2586)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2003-09
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Minolta SPXi, 35-70
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Travelogue: Stage photo au Maroc
Date Submitted: 2003-11-20 17:42
Viewed: 2147
Points: 8
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Un peu de tourisme& shopping dans Marrakech... Le resto a une terrasse qui donne sur la place la plus célèble du Maroc. Il fait chaud, le soleil commence à baisser... Lentement la place s'anime et les ombres s'allongent...


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Hi Mireille, you have a very interesting shot. Because you shot into the sun, your shot came out kind of colorless. The strength that I see in this shot are all the bold shadows. Aside from the shot being crooked, I think it is really cool. There is a lot of activity. I posted a workshop, I hope you like it.

I just love Marrakech, You did captured it well. The picture is nice because of all those people walking around.. Nice.

Yes, I tend to agree with the above comments. The image is a little soft but the subject matter and lines, shadows, people have added an ethereal dimension to this shot. I would crop out the whole sky so that only the black of trees is visible at the top and shadows of people. I did a workshop to show you what I mean. I also increased the contrast a little and decreased the gamma. This image can make a fantastic painting; the contrast can be increased a little further, abstracting the subject. I hope you like it.

Superbe lumière, vraiment original !
Dommage que la tour penche un peu, un effet du au grand angle certainement...

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