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young and old I


young and old I
Photo Information
Copyright: Swiatek Wojtkowiak (nygus) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 196 W: 0 N: 598] (7914)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-06
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon D70, Sigma EX 18-50 2.8
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-08-28 4:34
Viewed: 1327
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
on a verandah of old, decaying colonial house by the main street of Belo
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  • PLB Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 53 W: 0 N: 26] (227)
  • [2005-08-28 4:48]
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This is a picture that shows the age of innocence that all children hold and loose when they get older. I like the way you have compossed this picture, did the child pose for you or is it a candid? I like the colouring and his lovely white smile. The smile says it all. Well done.

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  • faubry Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3504 W: 352 N: 4203] (27199)
  • [2005-08-28 7:34]

this chil is really lovely with his smile... beautiful colors, bravo
francine

Great. Close to monochromatic brown, really nice staging with a central subject. Everything works.

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  • ishai Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 701 W: 118 N: 309] (4066)
  • [2005-08-28 14:58]

It’s a perfect smile, reminds me of really very famous big black singer,
I like the colors and the way he sits on the chair,

Its a different then usual POV but it not bad

Ishai

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  • gaby Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1574 W: 48 N: 1587] (19023)
  • [2005-08-28 15:54]

Hi Swiatek - nice POV and tones - unusual portrait on the center of the photo but it's very nice on this symetric shot -
Good work
Thanks
Gaby

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  • nerve Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 844 W: 82 N: 688] (9999)
  • [2005-08-30 3:58]

Good compo. i like this central placement..
he has a funny smile here..
very interesting one from you..moving..
Cheers.

I love the colors and composition of this shot. He reminds me of my kid brother. The washed out concrete floor and faded wood behind him make the subject pop out even more. Beautiful warmth to this photo. Bravo!

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