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Fishergirls in small village in Chattisgarh, preparing nets to be cast

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perryhooter (2424) 2005-08-01 21:36

Hello Antoni,

Great shot. I like your Daily life shot, its composition, its mosaic of colors. Despite the hard work, there is a touch of sensuality in this scene.

However, the tilt is somehow a bit too big, and we are missing the details of your figurants. I posted a WS to show
you what I mean. Unfortunately , I could not correct the tilt without cutting the left lady's head, which would be a crime. I guess you will have to do it with your own original shot.

Cheers!
Robert

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gaby (19793) 2005-08-02 1:03

Hi Antoni, very nice daily life shot - colors and compo are great and models are wonderful -
Congratulations for your gallery - great work very interesting -
Thanks for sharing
Gaby

UlfE (9158) 2005-08-02 1:14

Hello Antonio,

Excellent composition and very colorful. And a very interesting shot of daily life.

Ulf

nygus (8077) 2005-08-02 4:42

workshop z tym neat image wypadl beznadziejnie, ale co do jasnosci, pomysl troche o jakims rozjasnieniu, chociazby robiąc RAW przed ich otworzeniem. skora i wszystko takie ciemne wychodzi

gelor (3224) 2005-08-10 13:41

Superbe composition et couleurs éclatantes. Je préfère votre traitement à l'autre proposé (des goûts et des couleurs...) C'est très beau ! Merci
Gérard

KevRyan (22418) 2005-08-24 17:42

I like the postural and colour combinations here Antoni but I too think the tilt doesn't work so well with this one - the background does let it down a little for me - however I still thinks it's a great shot for the naturalistic action of one and for the perhaps more responsive to your presence posture of the other.

best wishes Kev