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• olli (2091)
• [2003-11-05 1:53]

Great shot with rust – again. Very interesting detail of that beautiful rusty boat. Very well framed. I also like the reflection.

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• smil (561)
• [2003-11-05 2:36]

I think I would prefer a more symetrical composition between boat and his water reflection, i.e. if you had centred just above the number 38 and taking more of the reflection in water - I hope you understand what I mean - Making in this way a sort of graphic form with a V turned 1/4 clockwise on the right side. Anyway the subject is interresting and the pic is not bad :-)

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• Miks (1703)
• [2003-11-05 3:46]

Nice detailshot and good composition heeding the rule of thirds. The light is not awfully interesting, but I like it a lot.

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• dsidwell (9727)
• [2003-11-05 5:23]

Well seen, Henry. The irony of the numbers accompanied by the rusty drips and horizontal lines speaks volumes about this vessel. Well seen and well composed.

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• PLD_images (7106)
• [2003-11-05 6:11]
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Interesting photo Henry. You just have to do a rust "theme" with all your great shots. I like the composition with the numbers. It seems that the rust spots on top of the photo are a bit out of focus. Maybe it's me, but I find that a bit distracting.

Otherwise, it's a very good photo.

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• avigur_11 (21138)
• [2003-11-05 10:34]
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A great rusty ship again, Henry.
Great colors.
I think I'd like to improve the reflection. I nmade a WS for you!

Well done.

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• cdewet (0)
• [2003-11-05 10:54]

Weereens 'n goei komposisie en kleure. The reflectionn adds a nice touch. Just watch your exposusre - Die boeg is sag op die roes kolle, want jy het f2,8 geskiet en op die nommers gefokus. Probeer f8 vir so iets. [die is net 'n klein hammertjie]

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• joseelias (361)
• [2003-11-05 11:00]

Nice photo of the ships bow. And also a nice combination of colors (blue/white,"orange"). also like the nunbers. I allways love to see that detail.

I think the composition would benefit if the top end of the bow was nearer to the top right corner with the possible simetry in the reflexion.