Sunset in Berlin Photo

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Beautiful sunset in Berlin

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rik (8) 2005-07-04 8:59

Hi Thomas - nice sky - looking forward to coming back to Berlin in a couple of weeks.

I think the shot needs straightening then cropping to give it more impact. I'd make the colour reflected in the water more prominent by cropping to a tight portrait and getting rid of the building on the left. The outlines of the central buildings would get more attention and perspective would be better too.

Hope I get skies like that when I come!

Elliott (109) 2005-07-04 9:34

Hi Thomas,
Welcome to TE. Nice shot to start with. Great colours and the reflection is beautiful.
One thing I would have done is crop out the distracting tree in the top right corner.

Keep posting

Elliott

ndb1958 (9249) 2005-07-04 14:30

Hi Thomas,
I agree with Elliot ... nice shot to start with. Welcome to TE.
Nino

nofer (3186) 2005-07-05 0:05

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Welcome to Trek site..!!!
Good picture to begin.
Continue....

Some clues :
- Put your camera in introduction...
- Always visit the members to give a critic, here it exists a type of retribution among the members! Observing (and criticizing) mistakes and successes of other members bring a lot of learning!
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supereira (9576) 2005-07-05 6:00

Hi Thomas!
Welcome to TE!Great contrast between the skuy and the black silhouettes.Very good reflections in the water.Good colors,light and sharpness.Well done!

Amphitrite (1592) 2005-09-20 10:51

Lovely sunset...
The colors in the sky and the reflection on the water is great. The dark buildings in contrast to those colors are also very impressive.
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