Photographer’s Note
For some people (mostly) in Indonesia, smoking is everything..
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marcind
(222) 2003-10-30 8:25
... like for this man, what this picture shows obviously.... very interesting portrait with blured background... BW also add to this... well done
i would like to give some points but system preventing it.... maybe later :)
carolynanna
(1324) 2003-10-30 9:26
OH YES YES YES YES. Love this shot. What a beautiful expression on his face. Such age, and I am sure he has so many stories to tell. You texture is spot on, and I love the contrast - I am big on contrast but it's not to everyones liking. Really excellent shot and I woul love to see more of these.
Luko
(13902) 2003-10-30 13:06
Love the BW portrait, the looks of the man, the mood.
However i'm a bit disturbed with the contrast and overall density, maybe also that I set my monitor on max contrast.
I would have posted a WS image if you had enabled the workshop option in order to let you see how I would have brought some additional light on Pak Rokok face...
avigur_11
(21307) 2003-10-30 20:47
Wonderful shot, Aabi.
Waht an nteresting face. What a chrachter!
You got a very good capture with good contrast, showing perfectly every detail in his face.
Very well done
Ebbe
(9585) 2003-11-06 5:31
Very good portrait. The light from the side but not too hard. I think you can crop of a bit at the sides though to make it more concentrated.
alekpet
(4659) 2005-08-01 7:46
For some people in my country, smoking is everything, also. Beautiful picture taken, nicely shown the "pleasure" of smoking.
Photo Information
- Copyright: Abi Rayyan (arayyan) (93)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Black & White
- Date Taken: 2003-05-00
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: Nikon F-301, Nikkor 50mm 1.8D, Ilford HP5, Orange
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2003-10-30 7:44








