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Photographer’s Note

In September 1994, I made a stay in Kenya during which I made some safaris.
This photo was taken in the morning around 5 a.m. in the National park of Masai Mara. We met on the track this man who turned over to his village after a hunting with other natives.
I hope that you will like this photograph and I await your comments.

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Paker (2636) 2005-06-19 11:12

Good framing, nice signature but I think the quality is simply not there. Lacks focus to the point that it is even hard to see what that Masai man is holding (piece of meat, scarf, or another object???. I do like the idea that you were probably sitting on the roof of the car (are you? I am only guessing here).. however, I don't think it is very well portrayed here (include more of that car or exclude it completely as it may be confusing to some).
Anyways.. keep on posting !!!!
regards,
Krzysztof