hole in the wall

Critiques [Translate]

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• Ulises (1014)
• [2005-06-04 10:14]

jonathan,
very nice composition, i like the colors, and how you framed quarters
rgrds
ulises

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• sparkle (108)
• [2005-06-04 10:28]

This is a great pov and composition and really very effective! I think the bright light on the other side really helps, as it contrasts with the dark framing. I also like how the tree is central to the frame and the bright coloured walls are fab!

Maybe it would benefit from cropping a bit off the right to make the shape and frame more central? very effective and well seen!

jenny

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• leschamb (371)
• [2005-06-04 12:48]

Jon,

I agree with jenny about cropping. In fact, you could totally make this square. It's a very cool window you've found, with a pretty nice outside. It would be great if there was someone out there sweeping or something, but things like that are hard to come by and you might have to wait a while :)

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• jinju (14241)
• [2005-06-07 3:28]

You were successful here! I like the black surrpunding the flower and then the view within the flower. Dont fret too much about not being successful. Im happy when I get 10 or so shots worthy of TE in a day out shooting. I really like this one very much. Would be great with a sharp border.

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• apache (1400)
• [2005-06-08 3:35]

Hi Jonathan,
A very innovative shot. I like the way you show your subject through the window. Nice contrast and colours.
Ranjith

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• flydragon (0)
• [2005-06-08 15:27]

hello Jonathan
simple, graphic very well seen
a cool shot
regards
••simon••

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• Gregtom (6111)
• [2005-06-09 3:28]

Nice idea, Jonathan! I would only crop this picture to the square form... Good job!
regards,
Greg

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• cobraphil8 (11068)
• [2005-06-09 8:22]

Good idea, the flower is very nice... and the colors too.
Good job