Javanese Fisherman Photo

Photographer’s Note

This Javanese fisherman had just returned from fishing and was waiting for help to drag his heavy boat up the beach.

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femkevdh (2633) 2003-10-22 15:15

very nice subject and I like your composition very much. Agree with Caprice though, could use a little more sharpness and contrast.

Rupes (913) 2003-10-22 19:32

Interesting Subject and nice composition.I think with a little more sharp and saturation...;)
Anyway its a nice shot.

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BobTrips (1853) 2003-10-23 12:53

I agree with others on the need to sharpen (at least parts of) the image. Mitras's Workshop improves the detail in the man and boat (perhaps his hat could use a bit more). But is seems that the water has been degraded. Perhaps a selective sharpening is called for.

Also, I find that horizontal line in the water distracting. A bit of cloning would break it up.