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Shan children


Shan children
Photo Information
Copyright: Pierre Sottas (padam) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 177 W: 53 N: 5] (186)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2002-11
Categories: Daily Life, Nature
Camera: Sony DSC-S70
Exposure: f/4, 1/274 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2003-09-24 9:56
Viewed: 1894
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 21
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Some children near Angdaw, Shan state, Burma.
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  • Great 
  • jrj Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5479 W: 506 N: 7200] (32672)
  • [2003-09-24 9:58]

Thank's for the colors. A strong, distinct composition.

Nice picture. Colors and composition are great. Looks as if it was oversharpened. Good subject well captured.

  • Good 
  • Darren Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1561 W: 120 N: 1061] (6795)
  • [2003-09-24 10:38]
  • [2]

Great shot of wonderful subjects. Really well done. There are two things which I think could be improved however. First, I don't care for the cropping, as you have them looking out of the frame, instead of into it. It would look better I think if they were on the right hand side in this case. Second, the NeatImage has had too great an effect. Too many details in the faces and clothes have been lost as well as textures. I think this could be improved if you were to use the NeatImaged version as a layer over the original, and use the eraser tool to erase areas where the NeatImage has taken away the details. These comments aside, this is a great shot.

  • Great 
  • martin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 514 W: 264 N: 37] (1242)
  • [2003-09-24 11:49]

A very beautiful picture. The muddy water enhances this. IMO the placement of the children in the picture makes it more arresting. I would be interested to see the result of Darren's suggestion of combining the NeatImaged version with the original (though I am quite happy with the current version).

  • Good 
  • light Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 312 W: 18 N: 86] (833)
  • [2003-09-24 12:17]

Nice colors, well defined photo, seems almost a postcard. Nice contrast.

Very nice!
You really got excellent colors here. Also, you succeded perfectly at catching the expression of your main subject.

Very good shot. Excellent colors and composition.

very nice picture, great colours, interesting scene, a small girl standing in the brown water with a boy on her back who is even smaller than her, really well captured!

Very nice.... if you used neat image, it looks like it, it gives too smooth a surface I think. Still .... I love these children's photo.

a beautiful shot. really my kind of picture. nice focus and color contrasts.

Les couleurs sont très jolies et impressionantes. Merci pour cette photo!

Nice capture, good composition and beautiful expressions. Good colours here.

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