THIS PIC WAS TAKEN IN FRONT OF A HOUSE INSIDE THE LIVING FORT OF JAISALMER.The city is said to be founded by one Raja Rawal Jaisal, a Bhatti Rajput ruler, in approximately 1156 A D.do bear with the quality,as it was digitalised from negative,which itself was in a bad shape.
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williewhistler (12381) 2013-05-16 3:42
actually the quality of the image appears fine to me,you have done well to retain so many interesting details in a very well composed shot.
From the rather shy children to the textured door and well placed bicycle it is a beautiful,very charming and natural photograph.Fabulous.
Best regards Les.
rigoletto (34197) 2013-05-16 3:48
Now this is a setting which needs to be photographed, and in full majesty of colors! Every detail is so lovely. One by one, you are creating a very beautiful gallery, worth beeing seen by many TE members.
batalay (34715) 2013-05-16 4:42
I love the colors, textures and the composition itself — with an old door, a very large bicycle, and the two tykes, smaller than the bicycle.
Miguel82 (20072) 2013-05-16 4:45
Superb picture showing street art on this wall of Jaisalmer, a magnific city in Thar desert
Good framing, excellent colors and exposition
Ilducabianco (940) 2013-05-16 5:17
in effect the image quality is not of the highest level, but the subject and how it is composed definitely deserve a positive critique.It summarizes the charm of India in its daily side.Also the colours are good, well saturated.
freakywindow (233) 2013-05-16 8:21
Excellent composition with beautiful colors.
lousat (72181) 2013-05-16 8:40
A magnificent old pic whit the typical colors of the camera working whit the film,i like the composition and the comparision of he bike and the small childs,excellent scannering work whit great details and bright colors,i like it! Have a nice evening and thanks,Luciano
ManuMay (34357) 2013-05-16 8:42
Even if digitalised it looks very well, very well choosen subject, excellent composition and colours play, I really like it very much...a great one!
holmertz (37011) 2013-05-16 11:26
This is an intersting composition. The bicycle fits quite well with the old door and the painting on the wall, although the combination is a bit bsurd. The children are cute (they always are) and do very well here. Fine colours and attractive texture of the uneven wall.
SnapRJW (29246) 2013-05-16 12:10
Hello Dwaipayan - Perhaps the shot is a little scratchy but I think that adds to the feel of this shot. All the main elements are perfectly balanced and each one brings something special to the overall composition. I really like this presentation, well done! warm regardds Rosemary
subhendu_bagchi (25243) 2013-05-16 12:26
I love this composition dear... In my eyes the quality of this image is not so bad as you said... Love the rich colours. Love the moments. Love the arrangement of the items in this frame... Just Love it. Thanks for sharing this LOVEly photo.
Fis2 (81844) 2013-05-16 13:04
Good reportorial photo.
I like colors and light
Gigidusud (13235) 2013-05-16 13:47
Splendid composition with the children and the bicycle on the facade. Nice colors, splendid light and great framing. Love it!
Urs (14082) 2013-05-16 17:05
Jaisalmer has changed but not everywhere. It is more then 10 years I last visited the desert town, but as I can see with your shot, there are lovely spots full of atmosphere. The innocent kids set against the traditional wooden door and the wall painting, not to forget the old bicycle. Great composition. well done
abmdsudi (39482) 2013-05-16 19:47
Definitely worth shooting. Textures, colors, patterns and human touch, and importantly the character and charm of this place. You have great eye in seeing art here. Well doen shot, TFS
jcpix (11416) 2013-05-16 20:26
A colorful and appealing image, one that's hard to miss! Perhaps a bit too bright, some of the highlights are a bit washed out...but it certainly doesn't take away from the solid color and great textures. Love the composition, everything is in perfect harmony to present a beautiful moment and picturesque scene. The children obviously add the human touch, and even look a little unsure as to what's taking place as your snapping this picture. :) I really like what you've come up with on this one, great job! Thanks for sharing the moment and a wonderful little part of daily life. Have a nice Friday.
dkmurphys (46140) 2013-05-17 0:11
Lovely composition in great colors and presentation. All the elements of your work are perfectly arranged. Good work!
BennyV (13544) 2013-05-17 5:07
A fine restauration job on the picture, well worth it!
Bicycles and children...for some reasons the combination always works in photography!
Great picture. Thanks for sharing it.
Wanda1 (14942) 2013-05-17 5:30
Doors and bicycles are always nice photogenic subjects , so you have found the perfect composition to include them both in, and with that wonderfully decorated ochre wall too. Of course the two kids are so sweet too and add a nice life element.
Bluejeans (64247) 2013-05-17 13:30
Ola Dwaipayan ,
Uma bela foto de vida diária com estas duas crianças encostadoas a esta parede juntamente com a bicicleta , bom grafismo e cores , boa luz , parabéns!!
Um abraço Gonçalo
Sergiom (54377) 2013-05-18 5:33
J'aime beaucoup la construction de cette image.La bicyclette vient contre balancer les deux enfants sur un mur avec une très belle texture. La lumière est superbe.
fabbs99 (15681) 2013-05-18 22:52
Excellent shot probably one of my favorites from your collection.Quality shot of real good colors and positioning of the subjects in the frame.Fantastic sharpness and brightness.Khub bhalo hoyeche !
JFS (32459) 2013-05-19 0:08
Great shot my friend, I like the composition, the colors, the sweetness of the childen, the play of shadows...A great work!
mohammad_H (8746) 2013-05-19 1:20
The view is beautiful with lovely children, and an old bicycle. Smells old and the paint on the walls and beautiful colors
best wishes for you
ChrisJ (94770) 2013-05-19 1:20
This is a very well framed shot with wonderful sidelight revealing the textural and tonal variations in the wall. The peacock painting reminds me of southern Nepal villages which had similar artwork. The bike and 2 children make good counterpoint focal areas. Tfs!
Curious_Eye (962) 2013-05-19 6:34
The vibrant colours draw attention to this image. I also enjoy the details of the door, and the wall decoration. The composition is a little quirky (a bicycle, two children, and a peacock in between) and fascinating at the same time because all elements of this scene work so very well together. A warm and charming capture - congratulations!
All the best,
dta (62866) 2013-05-19 6:52
Hello Dwaipayan ,
How great is thsis picture ! A composition rich in colors ,in textures and in strong elements perfectly placed . A strong light well managed , too .
And teh children are so cute ...
mkamionka (29187) 2013-05-21 1:57
very attractive composition with pleasant vivid colors. Very well captured with the bike, door and lovely children. Everything in great light.
Cricri (101189) 2013-05-23 5:49
Magnifique image, de beaux détails de la façade, de la porte, des couleurs, les petits bouts a coté du grand vélo, une lumière et un cadrage excellent
adores (34348) 2013-05-24 16:01
Jaisalmer is indeed a very beautiful town. This composition is really good - the way you framed the well decorated old house, the bike and the two kids is just perfect!They seem a little shy:)! Very good work! Colours and textures add a lot to the photo, too.
InasiaJones (31350) 2013-05-26 4:07
Maybe I am bias because I do a lot of this kind of composition, but I like this image very much.
What you have in bonus is a light that shaves the wall, brining up all the texture and reliefs, for a dramatic result. Your subjects and the bicycle are place on both side of the drawing, showing a carefully built composition.
Well done my friend!
sevy (15325) 2013-05-30 23:56
Looking to all the kind comments you received for this shot, it is esay to say it is a nice picture.
It is coming for the very good and strong composition, every thing is at a good place to consolidate the interest of the view. And in more a bright lightning giving a saturated colors on the wall and the kids suits.