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Copyright: Jan Weh (Wolle) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 34 W: 5 N: 19] (148)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2000-01
Categories: Decisive Moment
Camera: Minolta Dynax 404si, Minolta 28-80mm
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-01-18 12:23
Viewed: 731
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Sydney International Airport.
In a view minutes I will enter the plane and leave this place. Time to say good bye and have a last melancholic look at this beautiful country with all the beautiful people I met.

pp: hue + saturation + blurred + adding noise to the background.
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Interesting effect that you have tried to achieve, and I think it would look perfect if it wasn't for the border of the tail and the kangaroo which doesn't look very smooth at all.

lovely texture..............great shot..........well done

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  • Davids Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 311 W: 32 N: 424] (979)
  • [2005-02-20 4:52]
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Very good combination of title, note and photo.
What attracted me in the photo is the monochrome effect of the background and the contrast with the colour of the plane, as well as the plane only being photographed partly in combination with the title.
Wonderful photo!

Nice and creative framing. I do like the cropped airplane which creates an unusual view and detail and thus attract our eye. Regarding the frame I think that if there was more empty space at the bottom the image could be stronger because it would increase a certain feeling of isolation and sadness. And although I like the noise I think this could work in a “cleaner” image also. Great tones.

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